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Hollywood Failed

Your love used to be
A major motion picture
Made in Hollywood

Now it means nothing
It seems that Hollywood failed
In making a star

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  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:10:00 PM

    This is a very impressive write, but it is more of a senryu than a haiku.

    Michelle Avatar Juli- Michelle Date: 8/25/2012 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Okay great, thanks for the tip
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:48:00 PM

    A Hollywood star for your haiku poem Juli-Michelle !!! - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:08:00 PM

    Juli-Michelle Hollywood failed? Kindly look up my poem ''Hollywood''. Cheers.