Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
Member Area
Member Area
My Poems
My Profile
My Inboxes
My Outboxes
Submit Poem
Soup Social
The Wall
Chat Room
Soup Facebook Page
Poetry Forum
Events Calendar
Who is Online
Past Polls (Archives)
Member Poets/Poems
Premium Members For Life
Poets
Poets - New
Poets - by Country
Poets - Top 100 Poems
Poets - Top 100 Popular
Poets - Top 100 Contests
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poems
Poems - Best Poems
Poems - by Country
Poems - Hindi
Poems - Long Poems
Poems - New
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Poem Topics
Poems - Poetry
Poems - Random Poem
Poems - Read Poems
Poems - Search Poems
Poems - Short Poems
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Top 100 Recent
Poems - Unread
Poems - Urdu
Famous Poets/Poems
Famous Poets
Famous Poets - All
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Biographies
Famous Poets - Black
Famous Poets - by Country
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Popular
Famous Poets - Quotes
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poems
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Black
Famous Poems - Category
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Random
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100
Contests
Contests: by PoetrySoup
Contests: by Members
Contest Winners: Soup
Contest Winners: Member
Contest Status: Member
Lyrics
Lyrics
Lyrics - Search
Resources
About PoetrySoup
The Bible
Character Counter
Cliches in Poetry
Common English Words
Copyright Information
Dictionary
eBooks - Poetry
FAQs
Grammar
Haiku Syllable Counter
History of Poetry
Homonyms
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Love Poem Generator
Meter and Foot in Poetry
National Poetry Month
Poet Laureate
Poetics
Poetics of Aristotle
Poetry For Kids
Poetry
Poetry Definitions
Poetry Slam
Poetry Store
Poetry Out Loud
Prose
Publishing
Punctuation in Poetry
Quotes - Quotations
Resources - External
Resources - For Teachers
Rhyming Dictionary
Rhyme in Poetry
Spell Checker
Syllables
Syllable Counter
Syllable Rules
Teaching Prose and Poetry
Thesaurus
Videos: Poetry/Writing
What is Good Poetry?
What is Poetry?
Word Counter
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 
About This Poem

GROUSED

                                
                                    If you decide to
                               dig up your lush green grass to
                                    Plant on my side, you~

                               Are more than welcome;
                                    Otherwise keep to your side
                               And stop complaining.~

                                    Always remember 
                               when it rains, it pours down on
                                    All God's creation.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT
08-21-2012

Please Login to post a comment
Next>|Last
 
  1. Sanders Avatar
    Sean Sanders
    Date: 2/24/2013 6:44:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good job!!!!!
  1. Yeates Avatar
    Owen Yeates
    Date: 10/28/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Pace very well put like it, all the best Owen
  1. Kearley Avatar
    Dan Kearley
    Date: 10/9/2012 10:59:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You got that right! Informative write here..I like it...
  1. Wright Avatar
    Doreen Wright
    Date: 9/25/2012 10:23:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Could I have missed this? I love it. Rain inspires growth! Lovely wite Ink.
  1. Roske Avatar
    Ann Roske
    Date: 9/20/2012 3:22:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well done Pace - is that your puppy on your avatar??
  1. Walter Avatar
    April Walter
    Date: 9/20/2012 2:01:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Just wanted 2 thank u 4 da comment u left on my poem Beauy Fly i have so many more its just that im knew 2 this site n if u have any thing that i could b doing different feel free 2 let me know. in I really like this one simple n straight 2 the point. Check out my new poem i posted yesderday. thank
  1. Delacroix Avatar
    Caroline Cécile Delacroix
    Date: 9/18/2012 10:26:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nice "free verse" write, my dear! Though these aren't haikus, I really enjoyed it, made me smile! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
  1. onclaud Avatar
    nette onclaud
    Date: 9/14/2012 1:55:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    pace, such heartfelt lines and images that really charm my world... captivating!..:) hugggs and more
  1. wesley Avatar
    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 9/13/2012 2:15:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Are you buried together Pace? Nice to get those boundaries set and alleviate trouble before it starts! :) Luv, Lizzie
  1. loving iii Avatar
    john loving iii
    Date: 9/11/2012 1:06:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Obviously married or too long shacking. Lol
  1. Meyer Avatar
    L.Ruby Meyer
    Date: 9/7/2012 12:52:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Amen Ink, can't say how much I couldn't agree with you more here! X Peace Ruby
  1. shines Avatar
    kenisha shines
    Date: 9/4/2012 8:32:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nice one :)
  1. Galinta Avatar
    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 9/3/2012 8:07:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    so true.... wonderful write my friend. thanks for dropping by and your inspiring comments. have a wonderful day, always!!!! :)
  1. Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/3/2012 1:10:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Excellent Pace in my humble opinion excellent xx
  1. Cayton Avatar
    Cindy Cayton
    Date: 8/30/2012 5:36:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am looking at a new poet to the poetrysoup community in awe of the awesome work you have displayed here in such a short time! You never cease to amaze me. Keep thee old pen flowing, always, Lucinda aka Cindy :)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow..such a beautiful comment of yours..I'm deeply honored and proud..thank you for your neverending support!!! hugs :)
  1. horsman Avatar
    harry horsman
    Date: 8/30/2012 6:44:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Pace, these are awesome man! the message here shouts out loud.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry always sir!!
  1. Mjelde Avatar
    Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 8/29/2012 6:27:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well said and well done!!! xoxo - Laila

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs!!! Thank you dearly Laila!!
  1. Lander Avatar
    Annie Lander
    Date: 8/29/2012 11:39:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nicely ..

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit Annie!!
  1. Andresen Avatar
    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/29/2012 3:24:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are really good at haiku poems. This was lovely - well done oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always a pleasure Anne!!
  1. Breidenthal Avatar
    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 8/28/2012 10:27:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Amazing set! After a rather gloomy day, reading this was refreshing!!! Thanks for the eye opener. <3 Always, Laura

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Laura always!! hugs
  1. Galinta Avatar
    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 8/28/2012 10:39:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow!!! Great write, Pace. I love it.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you always Leonora!!
  1. Alvez Avatar
    Cynthia Alvez
    Date: 8/27/2012 8:47:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great penning. What a way to leave a message...Grit and truth! Cynthia

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Cynthia!!
  1. Reed Avatar
    Carma Reed
    Date: 8/27/2012 3:55:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    eye soring, poping haiku here INK, the grass is always greener on the other side... lol a message well penned..... NO COMPLAINTS EVER with your work my friend.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *Carma- not cream..sorry..lol
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sweet n sour cream!! Hugs
  1. Banks Avatar
    Devondra Banks
    Date: 8/26/2012 9:52:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haiku at its best! Lovely!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Devondra glad to have you share with me...hope to see you again..keep writing!!
  1. Carrillo Avatar
    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 8/26/2012 7:48:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is good and so true. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lucilla for sharing with me madam!!!
  1. Michelle Avatar
    Juli- Michelle
    Date: 8/25/2012 5:40:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I love it! A very nice twist on the haiku and full of satire :) =juli-Michelle=

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Juli....always :)!!!
  1. Pettit Avatar
    Robert Pettit
    Date: 8/24/2012 12:29:00 PM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A very well written trio of haiku. They read seamlessly from one to the next.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Robert...a pleasure to have you share with me.
  1. onclaud Avatar
    nette onclaud
    Date: 8/22/2012 10:53:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    great imagery and refection shine in this penning, pace... bring it on; wow!..:) huggs

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always a pleasure Nette....thank you!!! Hugs!!
  1. K. A. T. Avatar
    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 8/22/2012 10:41:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Interesting * skat

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the visit Skat!!!
  1. Williams Avatar
    David Williams
    Date: 8/22/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Pace, good set of haiku's....David

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David...hope all is well with you my friend!!!
Next>|Last


spacer© PoetrySoup | Terms and Conditions | Privacy Statement | FAQs | Contact Us | About Us