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GROUSED

                                
                                    If you decide to
                               dig up your lush green grass to
                                    Plant on my side, you~

                               Are more than welcome;
                                    Otherwise keep to your side
                               And stop complaining.~

                                    Always remember 
                               when it rains, it pours down on
                                    All God's creation.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT
08-21-2012

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  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:44:00 AM

    Good job!!!!!

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 1:17:00 PM

    Hi Pace very well put like it, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:59:00 PM

    You got that right! Informative write here..I like it...

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 10:23:00 PM

    Could I have missed this? I love it. Rain inspires growth! Lovely wite Ink.

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 3:22:00 PM

    Well done Pace - is that your puppy on your avatar??

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:01:00 PM

    Just wanted 2 thank u 4 da comment u left on my poem Beauy Fly i have so many more its just that im knew 2 this site n if u have any thing that i could b doing different feel free 2 let me know. in I really like this one simple n straight 2 the point. Check out my new poem i posted yesderday. thank

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 10:26:00 PM

    Nice "free verse" write, my dear! Though these aren't haikus, I really enjoyed it, made me smile! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 1:55:00 PM

    pace, such heartfelt lines and images that really charm my world... captivating!..:) hugggs and more

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 2:15:00 PM

    Are you buried together Pace? Nice to get those boundaries set and alleviate trouble before it starts! :) Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 1:06:00 PM

    Obviously married or too long shacking. Lol

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 12:52:00 AM

    Amen Ink, can't say how much I couldn't agree with you more here! X Peace Ruby

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 8:32:00 AM

    nice one :)

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 8:07:00 AM

    so true.... wonderful write my friend. thanks for dropping by and your inspiring comments. have a wonderful day, always!!!! :)

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 1:10:00 AM

    Excellent Pace in my humble opinion excellent xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 5:36:00 PM

    I am looking at a new poet to the poetrysoup community in awe of the awesome work you have displayed here in such a short time! You never cease to amaze me. Keep thee old pen flowing, always, Lucinda aka Cindy :)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow..such a beautiful comment of yours..I'm deeply honored and proud..thank you for your neverending support!!! hugs :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Pace, these are awesome man! the message here shouts out loud.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry always sir!!
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Well said and well done!!! xoxo - Laila

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs!!! Thank you dearly Laila!!
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 11:39:00 AM

    nicely ..

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit Annie!!
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 3:24:00 AM

    You are really good at haiku poems. This was lovely - well done oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always a pleasure Anne!!
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 10:27:00 PM

    Amazing set! After a rather gloomy day, reading this was refreshing!!! Thanks for the eye opener. <3 Always, Laura

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Laura always!! hugs
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 10:39:00 AM

    Wow!!! Great write, Pace. I love it.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you always Leonora!!
  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:47:00 PM

    Great penning. What a way to leave a message...Grit and truth! Cynthia

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Cynthia!!
  1. Date: 8/27/2012 3:55:00 PM

    eye soring, poping haiku here INK, the grass is always greener on the other side... lol a message well penned..... NO COMPLAINTS EVER with your work my friend.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *Carma- not cream..sorry..lol
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/31/2012 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sweet n sour cream!! Hugs
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 9:52:00 PM

    Haiku at its best! Lovely!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Devondra glad to have you share with me...hope to see you again..keep writing!!
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:48:00 PM

    This is good and so true. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lucilla for sharing with me madam!!!
  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:40:00 PM

    I love it! A very nice twist on the haiku and full of satire :) =juli-Michelle=

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Juli....always :)!!!
  1. Date: 8/24/2012 12:29:00 PM

    A very well written trio of haiku. They read seamlessly from one to the next.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Robert...a pleasure to have you share with me.
  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:53:00 AM

    great imagery and refection shine in this penning, pace... bring it on; wow!..:) huggs

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    Always a pleasure Nette....thank you!!! Hugs!!
  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Interesting * skat

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the visit Skat!!!
  1. Date: 8/22/2012 6:12:00 AM

    Pace, good set of haiku's....David

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/27/2012 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David...hope all is well with you my friend!!!
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