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MISTING THE WOODS

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MISTING THE WOODS



Misting the woods where we’ve pitched camp,
rain becomes a mischievous scamp,
large drops slide from heavy branched pines,
wrens fill birch dens that clouds assign, 
the tent leans and our clothes are damp.

Love, there is the warmth of our lamp,
so as we drowse let peace enstamp,
almost lulled by nature’s design 
misting the woods.

Soon, we will the afternoon clamp,
don our slickers, down pathways tramp,
for now, let long daydreams entwine,
the world is kissed while lips align,
this shower of sighs has your vamp
misting the woods.

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  1. Date: 9/2/2012 10:08:00 AM
    An incredible rondeau, Cyndi! I love the rainy scene you created. A belated congrats on your win! I hope you're enjoying your weekend...hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Cyndi, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:29:00 PM
    Truly lovely. Congratulations Cyndi. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 4:52:00 PM
    ahhh love in a tent ;) I too have one like this but I think it's free Verse Baptism of Desire..Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Hi Cyndi, I read this poem and really enjoyed it. I was struck by your use of the words "don our slickers" and the use of the word "tramp", these are common terms used in New Zealand. Have you been there in your travels? Great poem. Lee

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:48:00 PM
    Congratulations Cyndi, a super win xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 11:59:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Cyndi. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:13:00 PM
    Took the readers right into the tent with you and all the elements are appreciated too...a great title, Cyndi! gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 7:21:00 AM
    Entrancing foray into the woods. I like the natural scenery artfully ensconced in the first stanza.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 5:58:00 AM
    Cyndi I have added 5 more spaces to my contest so hurry and enter your poem. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 11:21:00 PM
    Wonderful imagery of the woods you paint here in your poem Cyndi. Makes one long for a trip in the lap of nature. Many thanks for you kind comments, your fav and the suggestion of changing the word 'entire' for my poem 'Autumn's splendorous beauty'. I agree with you and edited it. Will try to catch up later again.

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:44:00 PM
    Very nice poem Cyndi...it takes the reader there.Enjoyed.