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RAINDROPS FALLING

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RAINDROPS FALLING

Heavenly necklace, let loose some pearly strands The raining beads fall pattering on my outstretched hands Rivulets flow in the criss cross grooves of my palms Vaulting destiny's hurdles, washing away all qualms Patting gently easing away forehead's worry furrows Pulling me to radiance from the deep dark burrows Shiny diamonds perform trapeze on the window bars Minuscule prisms breaking white light into myriad colors Dripping dropping below flowing through leaves first Eagerly awaiting sweltering earth quenching its thirst Every drop performing the worth of its attendance Soaking the air with its earthy misty fragrance Could be a soft drizzle or a heavy downpour be it may These falling drops brighten up a world that was grey!

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  1. Date: 9/2/2012 10:02:00 AM
    Wow, Yesha! I love the image of pearls raining down from Heaven. Such beautiful imagery!! Congrats on your wonderful win...love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 1:16:00 PM
    beautiful write, my friend

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Yesha, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:28:00 PM
    And some people only see rain falling on their parade. This is lovely Yesha. Congratulaions. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:21:00 PM
    Congrats, Yesh,.. the necklace and pearly strands imagery sparkles! Jag

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 4:51:00 PM
    One of my personal fav's. 7 too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 2:21:00 PM
    Lovely poem, beautiful to read. congratulations Lee

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:47:00 PM
    Congratulations Yesha, a super win xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 11:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Yesha. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 5:16:00 AM
    a marvelous read Yesha.. completely mesmerized.. will be a top winner luv.. good luck.. on this breathtaking piece..

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:51:00 PM
    beautiful write, my friend - just love the last line. Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 11:30:00 PM
    ok, I saw your reply to me. that was funny that he was so chubby. My two kids were very slow to talk (which amazes me since I talked so early) but my son was walking at 7 months!! He was always into everything!!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 8:51:00 PM
    wow,Yesha, your entry in the contest is one of the most splendid I have seen for IMAGERY. You have some great lines in this one.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 8:50:00 PM
    yesha, in one point, you said he can't crawl or walk although he talks a lot. Is that still true? is he unable to walk?

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    Date: 8/20/2012 10:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This poem was written when he was just one and he was chubby so he cudn't crawl or walk. Both my kids had a typical style of moving by dragging or jumping on their bums in a sitting position! Now well he can outrun me when I chase him around the house. He got his speech very early, just like his sis. Many people are amazed at the things he speaks at this age.
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 5:45:00 AM
    Oh Yesha, a wonderful poetic read i have just experienced.

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:57:00 PM
    An excellent write so rich of beautiful imagery!Love it a lot!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:19:00 PM
    Had I been able to read with eyes closed....this is beautiful Yesha. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 12:06:00 PM
    Yesha, your imagery is just awesome in this one.. Breathtaking to say the least.. ;) tc Wilma

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 12:06:00 PM
    Yesha this just flows like water through my fingers, I love it...David