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  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:22:00 PM

    Oh, I hate when that happens too...egg on face et al....Been wondering how you and your lovely bride are doing. It makes me smile to see u posting again...gwendolen ps..I forgot to say ThAnKs for sponsoring the Txt-ing contest and for placing my entry! What a challenge I had writing for it!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 7:27:00 AM

    Great words..enjoyed, David! Jag

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:53:00 AM

    so philosophical David, and so true.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:56:00 PM

    cos if ya canna trust a friend, the bugger aint no friend at all-tall... (aussie slang)

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:47:00 PM

    hey, where is your new stuff already??

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:52:00 PM

    yes, very true, David. Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Loved the truth of reality, it's not the manifestation. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Hi Soup mail xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Great words indeed............. George

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:26:00 AM

    Well said, David.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:04:00 PM

    awesome,,, and so very true ;}

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:04:00 PM

    Well said my poet brother and friend. Thanks for keeping me sane. Lol. Btw the poem I just wrote was not about the "problem" it was about the friends who just weren't ... Michael

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:43:00 AM

    O yea! WORD!!! One big story here David, in these few words. I hate people like that, they cut every organ out your body from the back! SAD! One love friend...hope it didn't happen to you, if so, just think that, that person came into your life for a reason, try to figure what that reason is and make the situation be a positive one for you. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:32:00 AM

    truth be told David.. u stated it perfectly luv..

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 6:15:00 AM

    I love it!!! Spoken like a true friend...

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 5:57:00 AM

    I agree. Simple word usage but says so much, thanks for your heartfelt comment on Blessed, it means alot to me, Cindy

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 3:45:00 AM

    Very insightful monoku David, keep it up!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:51:00 AM

    your words are so sincere....David , I missed you so much all these time. I hope ur doing well. I am always fascinated by your work... love red

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 7:47:00 PM

    Yes, David. I absolutely agree with you. It is one of the dirtiest deeds! (smile). I've learned another thing from you, the monoku. Thank you for your very inspiring comment and best wishes to my Best Color of Your Love poem. Have a blessed-day !

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 3:58:00 PM

    David, good night...I think I will call it a day myself..thank you for liking my pic... always~TEX

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:39:00 PM

    Profound truth! Cynthia

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:17:00 PM

    yes it is (all too often)... Terry

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:07:00 PM

    Great truth in your penned line..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:03:00 PM

    oooooooo...yes...I told a set of poets here a true secret.... and I have not been mocked over it.. SO, i think i can trust Arlid, and Susan.... lol... now go squeeze it out of them... I'm kidding... I know your thoughts are serious... always.. your fan..the big TEX...

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 12:02:00 PM

    This is a special write, so true, so true! I really enjoyed your creativity you have expressed within this fiine poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:38:00 AM

    That contest has alluded me because I believe she said she wanted humour [maybe a dif contest?] and i never have found anything humerous about anything called a dirty deed? [a monoku is simply a haiku presented in a single line] Light & Love

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 8/19/2012 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie you are right, I haven't entered it ......yet.
  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:34:00 AM

    wow, what a succinct way to do dirty deeds contest. IS this for that one? Murder would be the dirtiest of all, but this one I would put at second, akin to the betrayal of Jesus by Judas!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:18:00 AM

    So true David! Excellent written my friend..Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:04:00 AM

    Oh so true,,well done xx

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 9:24:00 AM

    You have said a lot with these few words. So agree with you.