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About This Poem

Betrayal


To betray the trust of a friend ~~~ is the dirtiest deed of all.

© 19/8/2012

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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 10/13/2012 1:22:00 PM
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    Oh, I hate when that happens too...egg on face et al....Been wondering how you and your lovely bride are doing. It makes me smile to see u posting again...gwendolen ps..I forgot to say ThAnKs for sponsoring the Txt-ing contest and for placing my entry! What a challenge I had writing for it!
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 8/22/2012 7:27:00 AM
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    Great words..enjoyed, David! Jag
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    harry horsman
    Date: 8/22/2012 5:53:00 AM
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    so philosophical David, and so true.
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    DON JOHNSON
    Date: 8/21/2012 3:56:00 PM
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    cos if ya canna trust a friend, the bugger aint no friend at all-tall... (aussie slang)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/21/2012 2:47:00 PM
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    hey, where is your new stuff already??
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    jack horne
    Date: 8/21/2012 1:52:00 PM
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    yes, very true, David. Congrats on your wins : )
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    bl devnath
    Date: 8/21/2012 1:08:00 PM
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    Loved the truth of reality, it's not the manifestation. Loved always, bl
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/21/2012 11:25:00 AM
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    Hi Soup mail xx
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    George Aul
    Date: 8/21/2012 10:35:00 AM
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    Great words indeed............. George
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 8/21/2012 4:26:00 AM
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    Well said, David.
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    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/20/2012 9:04:00 PM
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    awesome,,, and so very true ;}
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 8/20/2012 4:04:00 PM
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    Well said my poet brother and friend. Thanks for keeping me sane. Lol. Btw the poem I just wrote was not about the "problem" it was about the friends who just weren't ... Michael
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 8/20/2012 9:43:00 AM
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    O yea! WORD!!! One big story here David, in these few words. I hate people like that, they cut every organ out your body from the back! SAD! One love friend...hope it didn't happen to you, if so, just think that, that person came into your life for a reason, try to figure what that reason is and make the situation be a positive one for you. Joy Wells
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 8/20/2012 9:32:00 AM
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    truth be told David.. u stated it perfectly luv..
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    cory long
    Date: 8/20/2012 6:15:00 AM
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    I love it!!! Spoken like a true friend...
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    Cindy Cayton
    Date: 8/20/2012 5:57:00 AM
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    I agree. Simple word usage but says so much, thanks for your heartfelt comment on Blessed, it means alot to me, Cindy
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/20/2012 3:45:00 AM
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    Very insightful monoku David, keep it up!
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    Red Fiery
    Date: 8/20/2012 1:51:00 AM
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    your words are so sincere....David , I missed you so much all these time. I hope ur doing well. I am always fascinated by your work... love red
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 8/19/2012 7:47:00 PM
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    Yes, David. I absolutely agree with you. It is one of the dirtiest deeds! (smile). I've learned another thing from you, the monoku. Thank you for your very inspiring comment and best wishes to my Best Color of Your Love poem. Have a blessed-day !
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/19/2012 3:58:00 PM
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    David, good night...I think I will call it a day myself..thank you for liking my pic... always~TEX
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    Cynthia Alvez
    Date: 8/19/2012 1:39:00 PM
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    Profound truth! Cynthia
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 8/19/2012 1:17:00 PM
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    yes it is (all too often)... Terry
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/19/2012 1:07:00 PM
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    Great truth in your penned line..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/19/2012 1:03:00 PM
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    oooooooo...yes...I told a set of poets here a true secret.... and I have not been mocked over it.. SO, i think i can trust Arlid, and Susan.... lol... now go squeeze it out of them... I'm kidding... I know your thoughts are serious... always.. your fan..the big TEX...
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 8/19/2012 12:02:00 PM
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    This is a special write, so true, so true! I really enjoyed your creativity you have expressed within this fiine poem! Great Work!!
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 8/19/2012 10:38:00 AM
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    That contest has alluded me because I believe she said she wanted humour [maybe a dif contest?] and i never have found anything humerous about anything called a dirty deed? [a monoku is simply a haiku presented in a single line] Light & Love

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 8/19/2012 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie you are right, I haven't entered it ......yet.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/19/2012 10:34:00 AM
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    wow, what a succinct way to do dirty deeds contest. IS this for that one? Murder would be the dirtiest of all, but this one I would put at second, akin to the betrayal of Jesus by Judas!
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 8/19/2012 10:18:00 AM
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    So true David! Excellent written my friend..Take Care,Arild
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/19/2012 10:04:00 AM
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    Oh so true,,well done xx
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 8/19/2012 9:24:00 AM
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    You have said a lot with these few words. So agree with you.
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