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Magic Carpet Ride of Soup


Zipping in and out of these poets thoughts
Weaving through the tapestry
Of each one’s up’s and down’s

Seeing the intricate patterns of minds
When thoughts are put on paper
As they write, read, erase

Seeing frustration and the ecstasy
Creating a masterpiece
Words are written in blood

Retrospective and contemporary 
Ideas, swirling around
Their baby, and with love.

© 19/8/2012    David Williams

I would take TPS on this journey to remind them of the wonderful talent 
in this one place...

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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 6:17:00 PM

    I really like this one.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 7:30:00 PM

    Oooh this is my favorite. You really captured the heart and soul of a poet. You master every new form. You never cease to amaze me. I've been trying a few new forms on my own. Stop by when you return. Miss you! Holly Moore

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 10:30:00 AM

    Enjoyed reaing your reflections on the poetry David; so good to read your piece.."

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:22:00 PM

    DAVID , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:49:00 PM

    DAVID, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, always~PD

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Glad you did this one David...a real tribute to the Soupers! Congrats on a super fine win. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:03:00 AM

    Congrats, my friend, on your superb win for this fantastic poem. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 6:15:00 AM

    Congratulations David, what a wonderful ride and win xx

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 4:55:00 AM

    I loved this one the first time i read it,congrads on a well deserved win...only you couldwrite this superbly....

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 2:09:00 PM

    Wonderful and awesome write,David..I love your magic carpet ride...Beautiful master piece..Congrats on your super win...

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 1:16:00 PM

    just don't spill that soup. Congratulations on your winning poem, and thanks for sharing your ride with us.

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Thank you for your comments! God bless you! JP

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 7:01:00 AM

    soup mail.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:19:00 AM

    a fantastic voyage David and PD will fly with this one too.. very creative luv.. good luck..

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:28:00 PM

    This is a very imaginative writing. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:54:00 PM

    lovely write, my friend - and had a chuckle at the PS

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:43:00 PM

    We have so many talented people who write on the soup. It is like being in a library as to which book to I pick and on the soup it is how many poems can I read and comment on today. It is a wonderful carpet ride. love phyl

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:36:00 PM

    Yes, there are many talented (each in their own way) poets on this one site..Great creative gifts and diverse ideas flow through the pages of soup..Thanks for stopping by my work "Grand Jury Duty"..I have finished it now...Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 5:57:00 AM

    brilliant carpet ride, place yourself on that list of wonderful talent in one place. enjoyed.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 3:40:00 AM

    Wow! Bon voyage to you and TPS, David. I am sure they would return refreshed from the ride. Great work and wish you the best for the contest.

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 11:21:00 PM

    You really took this contest to a totally different level with your creativity and originality of thought and idea...reading your poetry is an experience in itself I can say a magical journey that you take us on David,thank you for this kimo and I wish you good luck dude!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 2:02:00 PM

    You are so right about the ecstasy: I'm like a child in a candy store since joining soup and participating. This is a very thoughtful gesture, David. Thank you for all your encouraging comments on my poetry. Regards, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:06:00 PM

    David, Can i take this ride... with you and tps... i feel like pushing someone off this carpet... j.k..... you are very creative.... xox~pd

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 12:28:00 PM

    David, send rain my way... It's hot down here in Texas.... I'm actually thinking of a new contest right now... besides following Michael's blog... I also have 38 poets i will visit today..... and somehow you are double on my list... now let me go and re-read this magic ride... lol...hope tps falls off.... ha ha ha... kidding..xox LUV ~TEX

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 11:58:00 AM

    With extreme talen you have written another gem my friend! What an exceptional poem here David! I really have enjoyed rading this incredible piece this afternoon! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:36:00 AM

    hey, way to brown nose us all, but you are SO right. Who better to take on that magic carpet ride than all our wonderful poet friends at soup. This is pretty cool and I predict a big win!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:13:00 AM

    Innovative idea to do the contest here David!Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 9:02:00 AM

    that's a very heartfelt expressed poem, nice flow, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Erich