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paper boat


paper boat--
how far will it carry
my child's smile

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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 9/12/2012 8:56:00 PM
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    just dropping by for a quick hello. Hope you find some time to write, Kashinath!!
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    Gail DeBole
    Date: 8/25/2012 6:55:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win!
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    jack horne
    Date: 8/24/2012 2:46:00 PM
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    beautiful haiku, Kash. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 8/24/2012 7:33:00 AM
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    ....as far as his vision can reach, Kash....how relaxing, this park setting write! :) gwendolen
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 8/24/2012 6:32:00 AM
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    A man of few words but oh look out world he says it all, congrats Kash on your win love vie
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    Modupe Sefunmi
    Date: 8/24/2012 4:27:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win Kash!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/23/2012 9:18:00 PM
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    KASH, congratulations with your awesome win... always~ pd
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 8/22/2012 11:05:00 AM
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    A beautiful win. Stopping by to say thank you again and I have posted my corrected version. Love, Joyce
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 8/21/2012 8:20:00 PM
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    Congrats on your first place win, Kash! This is a precious haiku. I love it and I love the new avatar. What an adorable pout! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 8/21/2012 3:13:00 PM
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    Lovely haiku. Congratulations on your win.
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/21/2012 11:10:00 AM
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    Very cute avatar! Makes me wonder what to do to make the baby smile although his crying pout is so endearing.
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 8/21/2012 10:08:00 AM
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    congrats Kash on a grand write and win luv.. amazing visual ..
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/21/2012 8:05:00 AM
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    Many congratulations on your win Kash xx
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/21/2012 5:41:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#198" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 8/21/2012 2:18:00 AM
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    Simply beautiful haiku. Congrats on your win, Kash.
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/20/2012 8:34:00 PM
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    Now this win was a most deserved one. Very well done!! Congratulations!!
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 8/20/2012 7:57:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win, Kash!!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/20/2012 7:51:00 PM
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    wow,big congrats to you, Kash!!! He hardly chose any winners but this one sure was a deserved win!
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    Tim Ryerson
    Date: 8/20/2012 2:54:00 PM
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    Great haiku Kash!... Extremely unique and original...congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's contest - Tim
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    Joseph May
    Date: 8/20/2012 2:43:00 PM
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    congrats on a great win Kash
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 8/20/2012 2:02:00 PM
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    eyyy, congrats!. am so behind with my daily dose of error 500... drat!..:)
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 8/20/2012 1:46:00 PM
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    ohhh yeah, kashi... great juxtaposition here!... grrreat stuff!..:) hugggs!
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    Dinda Minardi
    Date: 8/20/2012 7:53:00 AM
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    Yeah, cos when it sinks, that smile will fade.. one proof that one thing can never stay the same. :) A very great write, Kash.
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/19/2012 11:16:00 PM
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    Simply loved this Haiku. A fave!! A wonderful write it is!
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 8/19/2012 10:31:00 AM
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    This is a gem Kash, I really treasure your haiku you make it look so easy.. I deliberately didn't bold the last line. Just my weird way of highlighting the line ;) Wilma
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/19/2012 10:10:00 AM
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    OH MY, you have done it again. I must say you are getting so GOOD at this. I now consider you one of the most adept here at Soup when it comes to writing haiku. Keep it up. Truly, YOUR haiku could go into a magazine! (by the way, is your son still posting here? Let me know if he ever puts up a new one)
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    David Williams
    Date: 8/19/2012 5:17:00 AM
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    Kash, miles I would think..excellent..David
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 8/18/2012 8:58:00 PM
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    This simple poem is just wonderful..one of your best. BG
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 8/18/2012 8:25:00 PM
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    ops! this is a very wonderful and clearly described paper boat in a haiku. i love it kash! thanks for sharing!
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 8/18/2012 6:36:00 PM
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    Very nice... Terry
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