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I see you but you look away
hidden from the world you know
never seen and there you lay

Beside me you turn away
scared and shy to face the truth
that true love is me and you...

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  1. Date: 8/24/2012 8:36:00 AM

    Agreed - love is scary.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 5:22:00 AM

    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Desiree. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:05:00 PM

    yes, great sentiment.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:57:00 PM

    Many fear true love, great little write here Desiree :)