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The Ruins of A Crumbling Castle

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The Ruins of A Crumbling Castle

I'm sorry for things I've said And done
Sorry for the life I've lived
Sorry for pretending I was the victim
Sorry for not seeing,
I made you the victim
And crumbled your castle
Sorry for not showing you how much
I loved you
I love you
I'm sorry for crying over nothing
I'm sorry for all of your pain
Sorry for hurting you so much
Sorry for not seeing
The first time
The second time
The third time
The last time
Sorry for crumbling your castle
In the process of crumbling my own

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  1. Date: 8/17/2012 1:00:00 PM
    Juli- I doubt very much you have anything to be sorry about, it takes two to tango!...David

    Michelle Avatar Juli- Michelle
    Date: 8/18/2012 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, David.. You brought a small smile to me tonight :)