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Give Me

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Below is the poem entitled Give Me which was written by poet Doreen Wright. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Give Me

Echoes and vacancies 
Where you used to be,
Is a reality,
I refuse to face.
Instead give me your face,
Look into my eyes,
Allow me to touch your nose
With mine and
Simply, not ever let you go.
I want to inhale you
And exhale me and
Become one over and
Over and over again,
Fully clothed,
Naked souls and
Until mathematics beholds
The theory of two being
Synonymous with one.
Give it to me.
Give me your past and
Your fears and your last
And your tears 
So I can hold it up to the light, 
Examine it and reignite
That part of you
That sings good night
With a smile on your face,
Just because you know
Your place
Is absolutely beside me.
Give me all of you.
We deserve it.

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  1. Date: 12/10/2013 1:21:00 PM
    This is one of my few "favs;" I wanted to read it again :) Still takes my breath away.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Hello Doreen, ... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA*

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:17:00 AM
    This was such an intimate and deep writing Doreen; I truly enjoyed it. I'm glad I was able to read it this morning.

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:17:00 PM
    Doreen , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing your pen..pd

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Nice expression of hope for love. Enjoyed the reading. Pl. read my write "TOW HEARTS". Loved always, bl

    Wright Avatar Doreen Wright
    Date: 8/18/2012 9:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you bl. I will check yours out.
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:32:00 AM
    OMG..I fell in love with the flow of this poem..I read it over and over again aloud....excellent!!

    Wright Avatar Doreen Wright
    Date: 8/17/2012 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL!! Thank you Ink...read it some more...ALOUD!
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 1:14:00 AM
    Doreen now I just love this ballad like confession, I hope you get your dream...David

    Wright Avatar Doreen Wright
    Date: 8/17/2012 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much David...I hope so too :-) I appreciate your comment and well wishes.