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Raindrops


As the heaven’s mirror shatters, shards fall
To earth, reflects from the floor
The almighty big bang.

© 15/8/2012

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:46:00 AM

    just browsing, love this David, classical poetry...you and your wife, have a wonderful christmas and new year...

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 7:32:00 PM

    I really must learn to write these kinds,,,, I love it David ;}

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:29:00 AM

    DAVID, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:47:00 AM

    woHO deep one David!! Prayers coming your way. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Great Kimo. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 1:11:00 PM

    Congratulations David a super win hope you ok xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest David. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 11:53:00 AM

    congratulations on your win dear David,how are you and how is dear Geraldine?

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 9:44:00 PM

    Love the words and flow David!! I love raindrops too...great Kimo!

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 8:17:00 PM

    Wonderful use of imagination in this beautiful Poem David and thank you for your kind comments on my Poem. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Love this powerful and refreshing kimo! Can almost see the raindrops though the sun is blazing outside. Thank you for the kind comments. :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 9:31:00 AM

    Perfect David! Great use of imagery and parallel descriptors. Stephen.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:37:00 AM

    Thank you for your support David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:33:00 AM

    Very cleverly done this one. Like it a lot. A great entry and Wish you good luck.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 3:56:00 AM

    big bang 4 some has been rerun, hope it dont come back too soon... good one mate...

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:09:00 PM

    nicely done, David! I have no clue what to do for this contest, but I better get cracking!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:57:00 PM

    Sounds like you experienced a thunderstorm to end all thunderstorms! Creatively described, David... cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 3:11:00 PM

    deep.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:27:00 PM

    Must have been a little stormy..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:19:00 PM

    Beautiful Kimo on the theme of the contest here David.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:13:00 PM

    What an interesting way to describe a downpour my friend! This is a really awesome description, fabulous write David! I truly love this poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 1:22:00 PM

    love this clever and imaginative write, David

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 1:11:00 PM

    I agree with Yasmin below. This is very imaginative.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 12:05:00 PM

    very very imaginative and the very originally creative kimo that I have seen...I can vividly visualize this....oh I don't know about autumn here David,can't make heads or tails of the weather...