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About This Poem

Raindrops


As the heaven’s mirror shatters, shards fall
To earth, reflects from the floor
The almighty big bang.

© 15/8/2012

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  1. horsman Avatar
    harry horsman
    Date: 12/24/2012 9:46:00 AM
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    just browsing, love this David, classical poetry...you and your wife, have a wonderful christmas and new year...
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    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 9/15/2012 7:32:00 PM
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    I really must learn to write these kinds,,,, I love it David ;}
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 9/1/2012 11:29:00 AM
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    DAVID, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 8/31/2012 11:47:00 AM
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    woHO deep one David!! Prayers coming your way. Light & Love
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 8/30/2012 8:53:00 PM
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    Great Kimo. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/30/2012 1:11:00 PM
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    Congratulations David a super win hope you ok xx
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/30/2012 12:19:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest David. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 8/30/2012 11:53:00 AM
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    congratulations on your win dear David,how are you and how is dear Geraldine?
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    Doreen Wright
    Date: 8/17/2012 9:44:00 PM
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    Love the words and flow David!! I love raindrops too...great Kimo!
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    Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 8/17/2012 8:17:00 PM
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    Wonderful use of imagination in this beautiful Poem David and thank you for your kind comments on my Poem. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 8/17/2012 1:08:00 PM
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    Love this powerful and refreshing kimo! Can almost see the raindrops though the sun is blazing outside. Thank you for the kind comments. :) Always, Laura
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    Stephen Allen
    Date: 8/17/2012 9:31:00 AM
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    Perfect David! Great use of imagery and parallel descriptors. Stephen.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/17/2012 5:37:00 AM
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    Thank you for your support David. Love, Carol
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/17/2012 5:33:00 AM
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    Very cleverly done this one. Like it a lot. A great entry and Wish you good luck.
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    DON JOHNSON
    Date: 8/17/2012 3:56:00 AM
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    big bang 4 some has been rerun, hope it dont come back too soon... good one mate...
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/16/2012 9:09:00 PM
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    nicely done, David! I have no clue what to do for this contest, but I better get cracking!!
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    Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/16/2012 5:57:00 PM
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    Sounds like you experienced a thunderstorm to end all thunderstorms! Creatively described, David... cheers, Jack
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    john loving iii
    Date: 8/16/2012 3:11:00 PM
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    deep.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/16/2012 2:27:00 PM
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    Must have been a little stormy..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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    kash poet
    Date: 8/16/2012 2:19:00 PM
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    Beautiful Kimo on the theme of the contest here David.Best wishes to you.
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 8/16/2012 2:13:00 PM
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    What an interesting way to describe a downpour my friend! This is a really awesome description, fabulous write David! I truly love this poem, Great Work!!
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    jack horne
    Date: 8/16/2012 1:22:00 PM
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    love this clever and imaginative write, David
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 8/16/2012 1:11:00 PM
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    I agree with Yasmin below. This is very imaginative.
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 8/16/2012 12:05:00 PM
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    very very imaginative and the very originally creative kimo that I have seen...I can vividly visualize this....oh I don't know about autumn here David,can't make heads or tails of the weather...


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