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couple strange lines

i lied when i was lying
 and i walked where i was walking.

 i lived when i was living
 and i died when i was dying

 i slept when i was sleeping
 and i dreamt when i was dreaming.

 i lost when i was losing
and i knelt when i was kneeling.

 i drank when i was drinking
 and i fell and kept on falling.

i was holy but never holier
i was strange but never a stranger.

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  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:09:00 AM

    I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Nathan. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol