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About This Poem

Dried Up And Parched

dried up, parched land


sky blazing down, sun overbearing...


heaven sent rain falls

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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/11/2013 9:31:00 PM
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    love the way you imaged this haiku out... i love heave sent feelings.....xox~LINDA
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    Juniper Lock
    Date: 10/26/2012 9:36:00 AM
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    Gorgeous Haiku..I used to write many and I may post one here..good job JL
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    Erich Goller
    Date: 8/30/2012 3:43:00 PM
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    Beautiful nature, Beautiful expressed Haiku, thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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    kathryn collins
    Date: 8/26/2012 8:24:00 AM
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    Dear Carol, So happy to see the quenching of a huge thirst. Kathy
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 8/21/2012 2:44:00 PM
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    so much of the country this way :( Light & Love
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    jack horne
    Date: 8/21/2012 1:46:00 PM
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    love this haiku, my friend - thanks for all your sweet comments and messages x
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    david scott
    Date: 8/21/2012 12:20:00 PM
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    SHORT AND SWEET BUT TRUE X DAVID SCOTT
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    Sean Sanders
    Date: 8/19/2012 12:04:00 PM
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    Nice
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    David Williams
    Date: 8/18/2012 4:26:00 AM
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    Carol well done, have a nice weekend...David
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 8/18/2012 12:21:00 AM
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    Wow...I felt the cool refreshing of that rain...an almost tangible feel! Thanks for stoping by Carol....one love. Joy Wells
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    Doreen Wright
    Date: 8/17/2012 10:15:00 PM
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    This title caught my eye! Great haiku Carol!
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    bl devnath
    Date: 8/17/2012 11:53:00 AM
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    Yes, God sends rain to give relief to save the nature. Nice philosophical trace. Loved always,bl
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    Daniel de Culla
    Date: 8/17/2012 10:41:00 AM
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    Lovely¡ Here's Mine's; Life's Beautiful Bullshit makes flowers grove Serenity in Chaos¡
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    Michelle Mac Donald
    Date: 8/17/2012 10:19:00 AM
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    Nicely written Haiku, Carol! The soil and vegetation definitly need this rain, as do the morales of the people. "heaven sent rain falls" always feels like a blessing. Keep well, love, Mikki
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    harry horsman
    Date: 8/17/2012 8:05:00 AM
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    excellent Carol, this is brilliant, the best Haiku i've read for a long time.
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 8/17/2012 5:40:00 AM
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    Excellent Haiku, my dear Carol. Your creative words had completely painted a very fantastic picture for another wonderful vicarious experience. Thank you so much for stopping by to read my recent pieces. A grace-filled day always. luv, leonora
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/16/2012 9:13:00 PM
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    Good one, CArol. It's very nice to see these new posts from you.
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    john loving iii
    Date: 8/16/2012 3:09:00 PM
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    well it's about time! but a quarter of the earths grass has burned up. look outside.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/16/2012 2:28:00 PM
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    Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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    David Williams
    Date: 8/16/2012 11:51:00 AM
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    Carol I like this, but you obviously don't live in the UK, we are awash with the rain...David
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 8/16/2012 11:13:00 AM
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    What a wonderful and delightful write my friend! I really enjoyed the intrigue of the rain coming eliminating the parched land! The harshness of the land being relieved by the calming rain! Such a beautiful poem Carol, I love it! Great Work!!
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 8/16/2012 9:36:00 AM
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    Good haiku, Carol! I like the happy ending. Love,Kim
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/16/2012 9:29:00 AM
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    Carol love Brown... a very expensive.... haiku...everything is deep with an epic heavy image...xox...pd
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    tristen temple
    Date: 8/16/2012 8:51:00 AM
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    *.* Good Morning Precious Carol Brown ˜ You Know, I Truly Do Admire The Loyalty & Dedication I Ofttimes Find Amid Many In This Moment Of Times Formation(s) ˜ Being A Lover Of Mercy & Love; My Heart Can Only Hope The Best For All When All Has Been Said & Done Within This Place Carved Through Reason & Time ˜ 'Sunday Bloody Sunday' ˜ My Love to You, Tristen *.*
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/16/2012 8:37:00 AM
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    Like this one Carol, well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 8/16/2012 8:06:00 AM
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    What a relief you describe Carol, enjoyed your haiku, love vie


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