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  1. Date: 8/23/2012 2:51:00 PM

    ((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:39:00 PM

    Nice metaphors you have here, David. Congratulations on your winning in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win David xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:19:00 AM

    Congratulations David!!! lets celebrate! cheers! :) **Mary**

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 6:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:37:00 AM

    sweet congrats on your award, david!..huggs!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 11:45:00 PM

    Beautiful piece,David...."silver needles darning the night sky;Once more I am reminded of this beautiful life..". I love this....Great job..Congrats on your win....

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 8:35:00 PM

    revisiting this one I love so much. what about the one you showed at PFT. Is it up here yet?

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:53:00 PM

    lovely poem David...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 2:49:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest with this one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 1:28:00 PM

    A captivating write, David! Love the imagery that brings this piece within our minds view. Gives a positive feeling, thank you!! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:31:00 AM

    Awesome write peppered with breath taking imagery, I agree with Andrea about the shooting stars contest. It would be an excellent entry.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:10:00 PM

    why isn't this one in the shooting stars contest. It's utterly gorgeous, and a FAVE.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:00:00 PM

    "silver needles darning the night sky" Great line, David! Great descriptive poem... all the best, Jack

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 1:23:00 PM

    Awesome write indeed - a sure winner here

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 11:40:00 AM

    hi David love the imagery in this write and yes life is beautiful when there are so many great poes on the soup to read from, have a good weekend catch you when I get back from hols, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Wow, what a beautiful description of an awesome meteor shower! I truly love the wonder that such an event produces my friend! You description is spot on and delights me beyond time and space! Your illustration is a wondrous event! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:38:00 AM

    My dad and I used to sit in the back yard and watch the night sky for shooting stars. Your poem captures what we felt, but couldn't express. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 8:17:00 AM

    fav part of this poem is the one silver line that makes my silver lining bright "A SILVER JAVELIN HURLED BY ZEUS TO SUMMON US MERE MORTAL" Next time David save me a spot next to you, we can watch it together, love vie

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 7:53:00 AM

    You are a poet in every sense of the word.. Fantastic piece my friend... Michael

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:48:00 AM

    Now I can't wait for night to go look for those javelins. Nicely done.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:20:00 AM

    Beautiful poem David....well-worked - oxox // huggs Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:11:00 AM

    like this David, you describe in this wonderful poem,perfectly what i believe to be an awe inspiring occasion,

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:33:00 AM

    Good morning David... it only takes 1 to star to remind me about the beautiful life I live. Everything about the a mystery to me... this is a nice way one can explanatin the beautiful heroic night sky... I'm doing well. ... love Tex

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 4:58:00 AM

    this was a wonderful verse.. Thanks for sharing cory

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 4:41:00 AM

    Lovely night sky. Thnx for your visits!! Jag

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 4:19:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this poem. Love the imagery and connection to nature.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 3:12:00 AM

    lovely imagery.....javelin/needles.......nice word play darning/adorning.........excellent poem....I especially like "needles darning the night sky".......this must be the contest winner w Syd

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:41:00 AM

    Ah yes... nature is so humbling, so inspiring... Terry (Thanks for another wonderful poem!)