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I'll Always Pick up Pennies

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I'll Always Pick up Pennies

"See a penny, pick it up, the rest of the day, you'll have good luck. See a penny, let it lay; bad luck you'll have all the day." (a proverb from my childhood the way it was recited to me by my mother) I’ll always pick up pennies from the ground. If I chance to see one lying there, It’s an easy thing; I just stoop down. I’ll take that copper coin from anywhere! If I chance to see one lying there, whether on cement, the dirt, or floor. I’ll take that copper coin from anywhere! It matters not if I am rich or poor. Whether on cement, the dirt, or floor, that coin I will pick up, for mother said it matters not if I am rich or poor, And what she said still echoes in my head. That coin I will pick up, for mother said to take it means good luck for all the day. And what she said still echoes in my head: I’ll have bad luck if I just let it lay. To take it means good luck for all the day. It’s an easy thing; I just stoop down. I’ll have bad luck if I just let it lay. I’ll always pick up pennies from the ground. For RHONDA & CYNDI'S PENNY PANTOUMS Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 9:53:00 AM

    This was really cute, but something I can relate too. I don't know how or why my obsession with coins began. But what's really more tempting when a coin just sits there waiting to be picked up? I've never heard this saying before (perhaps your mom is the creator?... lol)

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 9:37:00 PM

    Andrea-Dear, sorry for the delay in getting here! We so enjoyed the flow of this pantoum, and its message. Thanks for this lovely entry and a belated congrats on the win in our contest. Hope you are well-- I know weekends are busy for you (as they are for me, too.) Hugs to you, Cyndi

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:26:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 11:20:00 PM

    Andrea, congrats on the win with these good luck pennies!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 4:36:00 PM

    Great winning work that you penned..Congrats ....Sara

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:33:00 PM

    " it matters not if I am rich or poor, and what she said still echoes in my head..." you have excelled here, andie.. sweet congrats!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 11:46:00 AM

    Congrats Andrea on another top ten win!!Loved this Pantoum!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 10:00:00 AM

    CONGRATS ANDREA ON A SUPER SIXTH PLACE WIN FOR A SUPERB ENTRY LUV ..

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 9:14:00 AM

    This is really the BEST FOR ME!!!! My favorite pantoum! I'm coming back here to give my HUGE HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND, ANDREA!!! luv &hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 7:33:00 AM

    Congrats...me too, Ill always pick up a penny..seems un-Amercan not too...lol. BG

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:18:00 AM

    congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 1:24:00 AM

    Congratulations Andy this should have p,aced higher in my most humble opinion, well done and a well deserved win xx

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Hey, I don't know how I missed this one - it's so cute - you really know how to do these poems. I'm so jealous, lol. good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 3:36:00 PM

    I love this and I pick up pennies too but I give them away for if you give it to someone you have luck all day. I guess we all have versions of this one. Nicely done. love phyl

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 12:04:00 AM

    Yes my mother said the same thing,,,,, my 5yr old g-daughter does the same as well ;} The same with cracks

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 3:56:00 PM

    Excellent PANTOUM Andrea! I applaud you for this entry... I sure hope you win the contest! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 1:30:00 PM

    You said it! I always pick up pennies. For years, as a child, I didn't step on cracks in the sidewalk, or walk under ladders. Good write. Love, KOS (king of superstition) daver

    austin Avatar daver austin Date: 8/18/2012 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry. That should have been MOS (Master of Superstition)
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 12:28:00 PM

    nice pantoum Andrea....best wishes...love...Joseph

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 12:18:00 PM

    Penny is honey always. If lies in pocket good luck happens at least in financial matters. In India it's called Laxmi. Where there's no Laxmi life is painful. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:41:00 AM

    My mom must have said this also...I will always bend down to pick a penny up!:) It would almost be intereting to do a study of the ones who walk past or over it. Put down a loonie in the same spot and people might see it better? Have fun with the contest!! love, Mikki

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:06:00 AM

    I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Andrea. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 7:07:00 AM

    I too pick up a pennies, the same good luck vibes were instilled at an early age as well. To further enhance luck your supposed to pass it to a friend/love one, as to share your luck and they give it immediately back to you, to double your luck. Awesome write! Hugs.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 8:56:00 PM

    I remember when someone was emptying their car's ashtray in a parking lot. The ashtray was full of pennies, and they were dumped out along with the cigarette butts. I was looking for a shopping cart, but in addition, I found seventy-five cents. They do add up, and your poem is good as usual.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 4:25:00 PM

    another wonderful poem, from you, yes here in the uk we had a similar aspect with pennies(copper) we called our coins, hey hope you like Utah Lady, she is so special to everyone here on soup.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 4:23:00 PM

    Hmmm. I've let alot of pennies lay. Do you suppose? Nice poem Andrea. Good luck.

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/16/2012 8:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yep, maybe that is the whole problem, my friend!!!
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:28:00 PM

    Very good Rhyming Pantoum here Andrea..I didn't know about that proverb..Best wishes to you..

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:23:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..It would be amazing to keep a record of pennies picked up and see what the amount would be in a year, ten years. or twenty years..Your presence at my work is always so uplifting..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 1:56:00 PM

    picking up pennies is good for your health. keeps my back in shape. and keeps me flexable. weather rich or poor it is the way God has me exercise.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 1:31:00 PM

    wow, this is just excellent, my friend - having struggled with my pantoum, I know how hard this form is and you have made it look so easy. Hmmm, maybe I should start picking pennies up, lol

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 11:06:00 AM

    beautiful use of imagery and the rhythm is perfect, andie! .. creative content using proverb as your artistic cool... just awesome!..:) huggs!

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