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haiku 89


the barbeque burns...
it’s final ember
a setting sun

15/8/2012

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HOLLY MOORE Date: 12/9/2012 9:27:00 AM This paints a really nice picture and you can almost smell the bbq LOL...I like it's a happy one...Hugs, Holly
Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/21/2012 7:38:00 PM Hello David, Stopping by with a special greeting, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; - aka~ TEX
Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/20/2012 1:13:00 PM not sure on this David I always mix up the ['s] it reads like [the barbeque burns its final ember -- a setting sun] those I see as the 2 joined lines conceptually and gramatically? re: my 1 one'r a monku is simply a haiku in 1 line, the content and the concept do not change [at least that my impression] Light & Love
Debbie Duncan Date: 8/28/2012 12:33:00 AM nice ;}
Stephen Parker Date: 8/20/2012 9:42:00 AM Nice, serenading medley! Thanks for your kind comments on my latest poem.
Sukmawati Komala Date: 8/19/2012 10:06:00 AM ah...so lovely...enjoy your Haiku...:)) SK
bl devnath Date: 8/17/2012 1:03:00 PM Oh! what a nice haiku just read now. Wonderful image with magic like words presented with this. Loved always, bl
Erich Goller Date: 8/16/2012 11:20:00 AM A very nice expressed Haiku, thanks for sharing it.God bless.Erich
Terry O'Leary Date: 8/16/2012 3:09:00 AM Very clever, very nice... Terry (& thanks for your kind comment and 'hint'... I've changed the designation to 'ballad' as you suggest... I have much to learn and I use you as one of my (unsuspecting?) mentors)
Sherese Gooden Date: 8/15/2012 8:23:00 PM David, a picture says a thousand words but this proves that you don't need a thousand words to create a picture.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/15/2012 8:13:00 PM nice haiku, david. Are you at any haiku FB sites? (its)
Matthew Anish Date: 8/15/2012 7:31:00 PM Nice short poem. Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Russell Sivey Date: 8/15/2012 4:14:00 PM What a fabulous and incredibly delightful write my friend! I am always impressed with your work David! Such a wonderful piece, Great Work!!
Joann Grisetti Date: 8/15/2012 3:14:00 PM so when's dinner?
Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 8/15/2012 2:31:00 PM Very good haiku, David! thanks for sharing! hugs- Laila
Sara Kendrick Date: 8/15/2012 2:29:00 PM Thanks for stopping by my blog..I hope that you check out my contest..I really like the creativity of this work..You did a great job..Sara
ilene bauer Date: 8/15/2012 1:57:00 PM nice one, david!
Cynthia Alvez Date: 8/15/2012 1:46:00 PM Ah! Divine! I love Haiku Poetry. Cynthia
Anthony Nutter Date: 8/15/2012 11:08:00 AM So descriptive in so few words loved it. Thank you for the comment on Heroes Die
Owen Yeates Date: 8/15/2012 10:58:00 AM Hi David another bana on haiku my friend, all the best Owen
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 8/15/2012 10:13:00 AM oh awesome analogy David.. intense words of visual delight luv.. thankxx for my win luv ..sorry have not been on due to health battles lately but been reading all the sweet comments un my hiatus.. luv..
Gail Angel Doyle Date: 8/15/2012 9:15:00 AM Love it! I can see that imagery right now David. Awesome. Hugs, Gail
George Aul Date: 8/15/2012 9:00:00 AM Great picture........ George
S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 8/15/2012 8:29:00 AM Wonderful imagery..love it!! Jag