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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:27:00 AM
    This paints a really nice picture and you can almost smell the bbq LOL...I like it's a happy one...Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:38:00 PM
    Hello David, Stopping by with a special greeting, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -* aka~ TEX

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 1:13:00 PM
    not sure on this David I always mix up the ['s] it reads like [the barbeque burns its final ember -- a setting sun] those I see as the 2 joined lines conceptually and gramatically? re: my 1 one'r a monku is simply a haiku in 1 line, the content and the concept do not change [at least that my impression] Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 12:33:00 AM
    nice ;}

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:42:00 AM
    Nice, serenading medley! Thanks for your kind comments on my latest poem.

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:06:00 AM lovely...enjoy your Haiku...:)) SK

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 1:03:00 PM
    Oh! what a nice haiku just read now. Wonderful image with magic like words presented with this. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 11:20:00 AM
    A very nice expressed Haiku, thanks for sharing it.God bless.Erich

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 3:09:00 AM
    Very clever, very nice... Terry (& thanks for your kind comment and 'hint'... I've changed the designation to 'ballad' as you suggest... I have much to learn and I use you as one of my (unsuspecting?) mentors)

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:23:00 PM
    David, a picture says a thousand words but this proves that you don't need a thousand words to create a picture.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:13:00 PM
    nice haiku, david. Are you at any haiku FB sites? (its)

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 7:31:00 PM
    Nice short poem. Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 4:14:00 PM
    What a fabulous and incredibly delightful write my friend! I am always impressed with your work David! Such a wonderful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 3:14:00 PM
    so when's dinner?

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 2:31:00 PM
    Very good haiku, David! thanks for sharing! hugs- Laila

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 2:29:00 PM
    Thanks for stopping by my blog..I hope that you check out my contest..I really like the creativity of this work..You did a great job..Sara

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 1:57:00 PM
    nice one, david!

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Ah! Divine! I love Haiku Poetry. Cynthia

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:08:00 AM
    So descriptive in so few words loved it. Thank you for the comment on Heroes Die

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 10:58:00 AM
    Hi David another bana on haiku my friend, all the best Owen