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a big catch



a big catch---
in the spider's web
the full moon

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:44:00 AM

    hey check it out. Debs did a poem on you.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 6:37:00 PM

    Good short poem here. Intresting images. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Fantastic Haiku! no more to say.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:55:00 AM

    I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Kash. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 10:43:00 PM

    The full moon with an appearance of being trapped in a spider's web would make for a very fascinating photograph. Good write Kash.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 3:14:00 PM

    Come on out of the dark corner, the spider said to Little Jack Horner. The moonshine's sparkling in your eyes. Come on out and try my pies. Don't stick in your thumb, you shouldn't be so dumb. I've got cherry and apple, but not plumb.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 10:23:00 AM

    wow Kash.. a dynamic visual.. spiders have all the fun..now catching the moon too.. great imagery luv..

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 7:29:00 AM

    soupmail for ya

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 6:37:00 AM

    Hi, mr. Haikuking.....excellent!!!!! - // huggs :)Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 2:58:00 AM

    finally, another work that is beyond amazing, kashi... bring it on!!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 2:58:00 AM

    ohh, manila still drizzling.. i miss my moongazing!..:)

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 12:11:00 AM

    Yes, this is too good as well! Poor little big catch!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:07:00 PM

    aha, here is a new one for me to comment to on my way off here tonight. I think you may have posted this elsewhere? I think I remember it and I love it!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 5:46:00 PM

    love this!!! excellent haiku, and so clever, dear Kash!!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 4:12:00 PM

    Whoa!...Poor big catch..Getting a head start on upcoming Halloween..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by...Your comments were uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 12:47:00 PM

    This is a fabulous write my friend! You sure can write these Haiku! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 12:12:00 PM

    Kash, just love your haiku's, ..David