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First Kiss

First Kiss

Each time it’s a first
Same butterflies and raptures,
As in the first first.

14th Aug 12

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  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:47:00 AM

    Hmmm, I tend to agree! Nothing quite like it is there? :) Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:46:00 AM

    this makes me swoon, jag!... a delightful, romantic write!...mabe a senryu? :) winning wishes and huggs!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:41:00 AM

    So true....and everyone is different. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:07:00 AM

    Wow! Nice write, S. Jaq. Wish all the best of luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:43:00 AM

    hi Jay, great write :) thanks for sharing :)SK

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:33:00 AM

    Jag, nice one my friend, good luck..David

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:54:00 AM

    good one

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:47:00 AM

    Good Haiku here. Liked your take on the theme of the contest. Good luck.