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Victim of the system

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Victim of the system

Victims of circumstance, sick sins a certain glance into a man morality. 
Which wil work in advance for our children given a chance 2 think for themselves. 
I lurk entranced my hurt enhanced by the very mention of no u can't,
Gotta stay positive, wen in france!
Criminal intent with subliminal insence. Sex in the air, a minimal event. 
A miracle is sent. Don't mean to be synical but this intrical event has lost its purity but my cylindrical sense has brought me full circle on this tyranical trend.
Grip the situation the power of manipulation has preceeded this titavation. 
An invitation to my inspiration on this hour an integration like mutation its time to proceed with mutalition. Futile!? Patince. Demonstration of concentration all it takes?...
Please believe I'm a man of reprieve. Mind went walkies im on the retrieve finally recieved? we being decieved on a bigger scale than u'd ever believe, relieved on the day tis concieved; breathe a deep sigh like oh good grief, teeth any opinion i dare 2 reach...

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  1. Date: 8/18/2012 5:00:00 AM

    wow, thanks Cyndi. Really means a lot. Didn't expect that sort of response from anyone. My friends have told me i should get my stuff heard but their my friends, their supposed to say that haha. Thanks again

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 6:47:00 PM

    Lee, love your style, your honesty and the in-your-face message. Thought so much of your poetry that I featured it in my blog, Soup Newsletter, Aug 17 2012. To get there, click on the blog link under the soup logo at the top of this page. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to soup. We need your kind of KAPOW. Smiles from Cyndi

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:13:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lee. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol