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  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:28:00 AM

    This is an awesome write!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:16:00 PM

    what a wonderful poem David! great description of emotions!

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:15:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 5:13:00 PM

    Excellent write Bro and yes my write is true (smiles)....congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 12:01:00 PM

    Congrats on your win,David! Well said:) Best wishes to you and your family.Take Care Always..Arild

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 9:04:00 AM

    Congrats on your win! Perfectly said.

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 6:08:00 AM

    Congrats on your win David!!!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 1:54:00 AM

    Still winning David xx

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:05:00 PM

    Hi David,, ;-( sad about the news... but, happy for your win... my contest are going to miss you too... ,, Congratulations with your wonderful and sweet kissing entry. Thank you for supporting my kissing game contest. Good night~ :* PD

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:56:00 AM

    hats off!!

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:20:00 AM

    wow!! I like it!!!Great poem from one of my Favorite poet :). Congrats friend.. **Mary**

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 2:56:00 PM

    Ahhh!...Great work that reads like a winner to me..So descriptive in so few words..Thanks for stopping by..Wisteria is a very sweetly scented flower that is trailing or vinelike..It has gone wild here in places and in early spring it blooms all in the woods...Sara

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 12:50:00 PM

    Very nice David..A creative write here.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:58:00 AM

    You bring back sweet memories David when I was told to part my lips and meet him halfway. Wow! :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Yes, you've captured all those first kiss emotions...come to think of it, I still GET those emotions when I get kissed (once a year if I'm lucky)...Great write, David!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:09:00 AM

    Excellent poem, David. I love it. Thanks for sharing and good luck always!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 6:52:00 AM

    Very well done with a before and after description. This would be the most unique entry for the contest. Good luck to you.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 6:32:00 AM

    Wow, this is a tremendous write my friend! I am amazed with its awe factor! What a humbling, powerful little piece you have written David! I love it! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 5:48:00 AM

    Nice one David , like it xxx

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 5:14:00 AM

    floating in heaven:)very cute poem

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 4:40:00 AM

    this says it all David, excellent rendering.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 3:32:00 AM

    You have brought out well the trepidation and joy of it..!! Jag

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 3:19:00 AM

    Great before and after description of a kiss. Good write David.