First Kiss by David Williams

(prologue) A longing. Anxious feelings. Trembling hands. Racing heart. Fear. Winter. Life and Death. Your lips touched mine. (epilogue) Excitement. Adulation. Summer. Tears. Joy. Elation. © 14/8/2012


Skyler Dawn Date: 11/20/2012 10:28:00 AM This is an awesome write!
Bethany St John Date: 10/25/2012 8:16:00 PM what a wonderful poem David! great description of emotions!
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/29/2012 8:15:00 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest David. Love, Carol
Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 8/26/2012 5:13:00 PM Excellent write Bro and yes my write is true (smiles)....congrats on your win!
Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 8/24/2012 12:01:00 PM Congrats on your win,David! Well said:) Best wishes to you and your family.Take Care Always..Arild
SCRIBE ML Date: 8/24/2012 9:04:00 AM Congrats on your win! Perfectly said.
Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/24/2012 6:08:00 AM Congrats on your win David!!!!
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 8/24/2012 1:54:00 AM Still winning David xx
Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/23/2012 9:05:00 PM Hi David,, ;-( sad about the news... but, happy for your win... my contest are going to miss you too... ,, Congratulations with your wonderful and sweet kissing entry. Thank you for supporting my kissing game contest. Good night~ :* PD
apoorva patrikar Date: 8/21/2012 9:56:00 AM hats off!!
Maria Paz Samelo Date: 8/15/2012 8:20:00 AM wow!! I like it!!!Great poem from one of my Favorite poet :). Congrats friend.. Mary
Sara Kendrick Date: 8/14/2012 2:56:00 PM Ahhh!...Great work that reads like a winner to me..So descriptive in so few words..Thanks for stopping by..Wisteria is a very sweetly scented flower that is trailing or vinelike..It has gone wild here in places and in early spring it blooms all in the woods...Sara
kash poet Date: 8/14/2012 12:50:00 PM Very nice David..A creative write here.
elizabeth wesley Date: 8/14/2012 9:58:00 AM You bring back sweet memories David when I was told to part my lips and meet him halfway. Wow! :)
Tim Ryerson Date: 8/14/2012 9:28:00 AM Yes, you've captured all those first kiss emotions...come to think of it, I still GET those emotions when I get kissed (once a year if I'm lucky)...Great write, David!
Leonora Galinta Date: 8/14/2012 9:09:00 AM Excellent poem, David. I love it. Thanks for sharing and good luck always!
Yesha Shah Date: 8/14/2012 6:52:00 AM Very well done with a before and after description. This would be the most unique entry for the contest. Good luck to you.
Russell Sivey Date: 8/14/2012 6:32:00 AM Wow, this is a tremendous write my friend! I am amazed with its awe factor! What a humbling, powerful little piece you have written David! I love it! Great Work!!
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 8/14/2012 5:48:00 AM Nice one David , like it xxx
Mad Hu Date: 8/14/2012 5:14:00 AM floating in heaven:)very cute poem
harry horsman Date: 8/14/2012 4:40:00 AM this says it all David, excellent rendering.
S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 8/14/2012 3:32:00 AM You have brought out well the trepidation and joy of it..!! Jag
Robert Pettit Date: 8/14/2012 3:19:00 AM Great before and after description of a kiss. Good write David.

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