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a chance

a chance to meet
if ever there is
a glimpse o sweet
away from this

a chance; a pass
a second to beat
of once was; was
would be a treat

summing up the words
i felt... i feel.?
how she once stirred
what i could not reveal...

but then im done
aint got no might...
her face... a smile upon.
i have no right.

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  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Hi Lorenzo, stopping by to say hi and , congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:51:00 AM

    Good morning Lorenzo.... welcome to the poetry soup... this is sweet to some extend. ...its good to know ones place...Linda

    locsin Avatar lorenzo locsin Date: 8/14/2012 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks... :)