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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 9:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 3:57:00 PM

    Great work..Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:51:00 PM

    So true Yasmin. Great title. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:47:00 AM

    Congratulations Yasmin, nicely done xx

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:26:00 PM

    yas, dear.. Congrats on a great win!

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 8:55:00 PM

    YASMIN;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:52:00 PM

    Congratulations Yasmin on your lovely win. Nice to see your name. Lee

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:44:00 PM

    Congrats Yasmin on your win. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 12:56:00 PM

    hey, nice seeing you here on the list at number 3, with me, sweetie!! Congrats to you. You did not say "nothing' with this one!

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 12:39:00 PM

    Nicely done, Yasmin! Congrats on your win! Love, KIm

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:36:00 AM

    Very nice... Congratulations on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 2:29:00 PM

    love the depth of silence created by your lovely pen, mareeey!... you must be well by now.. take care and winning huggs from priya!...have you heard of osho from india?..:)

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:55:00 PM

    wonderful how you added the part "truth brightening"

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 6:33:00 AM

    Okay so THAT was for the contest after all...good revised version keeping the original gist. I thought you might just have written it offhand on the same theme. Good luck dear.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 2:35:00 AM

    Yas, ah the revised version, I like both of them, they are very profound and make you stop and think about silence which is exactly what it is supposed to do, well done and good luck,...David

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 8:17:00 PM

    Very deep message Yasmin...nice!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 8:02:00 PM

    What a brilliant write my friend! This verse is so very true, I feel it all the time late at night when I work! When everyone is in bed and it's just me and the silence...it can be deafening! What a perfect poem Yasmin! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:18:00 PM

    How true; nice little verse.