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Deadly Silence

The woods were still and without sound,
The night I hid her in the ground.

For Susan’s Silence contest

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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/29/2012 9:45:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 8/27/2012 12:25:00 AM
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    Congratulations with this Deadly Silence entry. Eerie.... Love, Suzette
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 8/26/2012 3:22:00 PM
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    So that's where u hid the body!! You told on yourself!! haha...Congrats on a fun spirited and creative entry! Always nice to see your work at the top! gwendolen
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 8/26/2012 2:14:00 PM
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    Congrats Jack, a suspense full line, hugs vie
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    Tim Ryerson
    Date: 8/26/2012 1:53:00 PM
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    Wow, Jack!...really unique idea for the contest!... hope you covered your tracks carefully and don't get caught!...Congratulations - Tim
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 8/26/2012 12:17:00 PM
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    this is SOOOO good..congrats. I had to smile at how horrid it was....lol BG
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 8/26/2012 11:09:00 AM
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    congrats Jack on first place win for an eerie offering luv..very creative ..
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    Dinda Minardi
    Date: 8/26/2012 7:02:00 AM
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    A very creepy poem, Jack. You sounded more like Poe.. ;) Congrats on the hge win :D

    Minardi Avatar Dinda Minardi Date: 8/26/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    huge win :)
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/26/2012 6:27:00 AM
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    wooooh creepy ,sooooo good xx
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/25/2012 11:18:00 PM
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    congratulations Jack!! great poet!!
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/25/2012 10:13:00 PM
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    Awesome write! Congrats on a great win!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/25/2012 9:06:00 PM
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    JACK;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/25/2012 8:28:00 PM
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    Jack;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD
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    Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/25/2012 5:33:00 PM
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    I'll say its deadly, well done. Congratulations on this first place win. Lee
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 8/25/2012 4:45:00 PM
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    Congrats Jack, your first place Couplet is a well deserved winner. One love. Joy Wells
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    Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 8/25/2012 3:48:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win Jack. Witty!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/25/2012 2:11:00 PM
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    Super congrats..((()))!!!!Sara
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/25/2012 12:45:00 PM
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    i just knew it. I knew this would appeal to Susan's "dark" side. BIG CONGRATS. Wish I'd thought of it.
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 8/25/2012 12:11:00 PM
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    This was chilling, Jack. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love,Kim
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/25/2012 12:09:00 PM
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    congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (^_^) have a nice day
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    Cynthia Alvez
    Date: 8/25/2012 11:04:00 AM
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    Congratulations on being #1 Cynthia
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 8/25/2012 11:00:00 AM
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    Memories of Jack the Ripper. Big congratulations Jack for your exciting win. Love, Joyce
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 8/25/2012 10:22:00 AM
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    Nice imagery... Congratulations on your win, my friend! Terry
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    Doreen Wright
    Date: 8/17/2012 10:32:00 PM
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    This made my heart beat fast! Cool couplet!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/15/2012 8:29:00 PM
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    I LOVE this, how did I miss all these new poems of yours?? I think Susan will love this one too. It's very unique.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/14/2012 2:52:00 PM
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    Only the sound of the scraping of the shovel against the dirt..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like a winning entry in Susan's contest...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 8/14/2012 3:12:00 AM
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    i am taken by the mysterious silence of your thoughts, jack... a fine job!..:) huggs!
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 8/13/2012 2:10:00 PM
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    Wow, what a sad poem my friend! I feel the traumatic nature of this poem! I love your write, Great Work!!


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