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I just want to dance

                                    we think that we will die one day
                         and that we are as close as we are right now
                                             I just want to dance
                                                 dance with you
                                            let the world see you

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  1. JOHNSON Avatar
    DON JOHNSON
    Date: 8/30/2012 2:48:00 AM
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    loving day by day ... great poem babe....
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    harry horsman
    Date: 8/22/2012 9:57:00 AM
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    lovely poem, enjoyed.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 8/25/2012 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Harry! oxoxo hugs Laila
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    JH Thomas
    Date: 8/13/2012 5:45:00 PM
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    nice write. forget the worries of this life and just dance - JH

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 8/16/2012 3:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for coming back to read the poem mine, appreciate it .. Laila
  1. Ertsland Avatar
    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 8/13/2012 2:02:00 PM
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    Let`s dance through life,sweetie;-) Love U xox

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 8/16/2012 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    of course we will dance .. Love U 2 xoxo - Laila
  1. Andresen Avatar
    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/13/2012 12:36:00 PM
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    Well said Laila, just dance...- oxox love mom :)

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 8/16/2012 3:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I dance all day ... lol .... - xoxo love Laila
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 8/13/2012 12:32:00 PM
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    whoo, an upbeat kind of winsome piece, laila... just wanna make me dance!... you sway!.. have a lovely time!.. i think this falls under 'verse?'... huggs!;)

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 8/16/2012 3:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for the nice words and for taking the time to read my poem Nette ... and thanks for your help ... I've changed it to verse.. I'm not good at knowing what genre my poems are written in... :( xoxo Laila


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