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Girls,Girls

Girls love can be bitter,love can be sweet,
Take this warning,don't hurry to fall in love 
with every man that you meet,
Don't let the first hello or pretty smile,sweep 
you off your feet,
Take time and get to know the man that you meet,
You didn't take warning,instead,
The first date,a kiss on your forehead,
The second,a kiss on your cheek,
On the third date,tongue pass teeth,
Three days after you meet,you are under the sheet,
Madly in love and it's not even a week,
Then here comes bitter,out goes sweet,
You start seeing him less,your life feels incomplete,
You check out his file and finds out he has two 
girls on the block and a big woman down the street,
You talk to him about it, he threatens to knock out 
your teeth,
Your loving relationship,only lasted three weeks,
It could have been avoided,more bitter than sweet....


dedicated to my 2 daughters Roxxanna 24,and Shanique 18,
daddy loves you.....

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  1. Date: 7/26/2014 7:01:00 PM
    A good piece of advice Richards..Have a good day!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 7/30/2014 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Saba,same to you
  1. Date: 5/7/2014 3:28:00 PM
    You look to young to have such old children. This is an entertaining poem to describe the dark sid of relationships.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 7/30/2014 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Richard,started young lol
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:38:00 PM
    Richard, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 12/22/2012 2:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    same to you in the festive season PD,THANK YOU VERY MUCH
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 7:58:00 PM
    Richard Palmer, Your poetry rocks. How else can I say it? So far, those that I've read, indicate you ride a narrow path... no deviation in thought from poem to poem... This one speaks volumes. As I've mentioned many times, a poet writes from the heart. Her/she shows their inner self. Life is too short to wander all over with out direction. Keep up the good work. YarnSpinner

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 12/14/2012 4:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much Robert,have to have a view of where you want to go before you start the journey and when you find the right road stick to it
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 12:38:00 AM
    this one is nice... SOME girls are like that.. Girls be sure to love before you fall ok?! :)))

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 12/9/2012 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol,thanks Shirlyn
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 3:57:00 PM
    You was trying to be negative, lol, but it is ok, nice poem

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 10/14/2012 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    no protective,happy you liked,thanks Tarsha
  1. Date: 10/6/2012 7:41:00 AM
    Oh Wow Richard....hmmmm good advice. So much deception in this world and people who treat love with such disrespect. Great poem. Hope you daughters appreciated your kind advice :D - Shaz

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 10/6/2012 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    they do,lol,thanks Shaz
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:42:00 AM
    Hi Richard, loved the poem, I doubt your daughters are going to listen when there are kisses involved, lol. Nicely written.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 10/2/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol thanks much Sheri
  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:00:00 AM
    aww... liked ur lines

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 9/30/2012 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Apoorva
  1. Date: 9/27/2012 5:41:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading this poem.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 9/27/2012 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    nice,thank you Vesna
  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:17:00 PM
    Great advice and write Richard! Your girls are lucky to have a daddy like you. Hugs

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 9/25/2012 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    they think so too,lol,thanks much Cecillia
  1. Date: 9/7/2012 10:58:00 AM
    This is soo meaningful(: an eye opening poem for girls. Especially my age(:

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 9/7/2012 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Pavitra,that was the intent
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 9:35:00 PM
    very good poetry. I always enjoy reading your stuff. Cindy

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 9/7/2012 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Cindy,keep reading
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:47:00 PM
    I really like this, sooo true

    Lee Avatar Bree Lee
    Date: 9/3/2012 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Check out my poem Dear Girl, Just posted it :) thanks
    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 9/2/2012 12:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Kelsey
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 5:36:00 AM
    Wish i had read this when i was younger, Richard, i've only twin granddaugthers, I enjoyed this lesson, thank you.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 9/1/2012 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you are welcome Harry,thanks
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 9:44:00 AM
    Richard; I like this. coming from a man - I hope they listen. Some people confuse love with sex. True love goes deeper than that. you don't look that old to have daughters that age. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 8/29/2012 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    they do,thanks Lucilla,in my 40s
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 9:27:00 PM
    I love this poem, Richard. and with not that much experience (im still young) lol i will keep this in mind. thank you for posting it. -Halie lol

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 8/29/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hope you do saves a lot of stress,lol thanks Halie
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:52:00 PM
    A funny one! and thank heavens not the reality I grew up with!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 8/27/2012 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hahaha you are the lucky one,thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 8/24/2012 11:53:00 PM
    Awesome. Thanks for sharing - Landor

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 8/25/2012 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Landor
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 2:50:00 AM
    Love this poem : ) A good advice, it is. Thanks for the reminder of the reality of this life. Have a lovely day!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 8/23/2012 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    same to you Ayman,thanks much
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