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Girls,Girls

Girls love can be bitter,love can be sweet,
Take this warning,don't hurry to fall in love 
with every man that you meet,
Don't let the first hello or pretty smile,sweep 
you off your feet,
Take time and get to know the man that you meet,
You didn't take warning,instead,
The first date,a kiss on your forehead,
The second,a kiss on your cheek,
On the third date,tongue pass teeth,
Three days after you meet,you are under the sheet,
Madly in love and it's not even a week,
Then here comes bitter,out goes sweet,
You start seeing him less,your life feels incomplete,
You check out his file and finds out he has two 
girls on the block and a big woman down the street,
You talk to him about it, he threatens to knock out 
your teeth,
Your loving relationship,only lasted three weeks,
It could have been avoided,more bitter than sweet....


dedicated to my 2 daughters Roxxanna 24,and Shanique 18,
daddy loves you.....

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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:38:00 PM

    Richard, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/22/2012 2:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    same to you in the festive season PD,THANK YOU VERY MUCH
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 7:58:00 PM

    Richard Palmer, Your poetry rocks. How else can I say it? So far, those that I've read, indicate you ride a narrow path... no deviation in thought from poem to poem... This one speaks volumes. As I've mentioned many times, a poet writes from the heart. Her/she shows their inner self. Life is too short to wander all over with out direction. Keep up the good work. YarnSpinner

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/14/2012 4:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Robert,have to have a view of where you want to go before you start the journey and when you find the right road stick to it
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 12:38:00 AM

    this one is nice... SOME girls are like that.. Girls be sure to love before you fall ok?! :)))

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/9/2012 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol,thanks Shirlyn
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 3:57:00 PM

    You was trying to be negative, lol, but it is ok, nice poem

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 10/14/2012 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    no protective,happy you liked,thanks Tarsha
  1. Date: 10/6/2012 7:41:00 AM

    Oh Wow Richard....hmmmm good advice. So much deception in this world and people who treat love with such disrespect. Great poem. Hope you daughters appreciated your kind advice :D - Shaz

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 10/6/2012 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    they do,lol,thanks Shaz
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Hi Richard, loved the poem, I doubt your daughters are going to listen when there are kisses involved, lol. Nicely written.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 10/2/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol thanks much Sheri
  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:00:00 AM

    aww... liked ur lines

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/30/2012 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Apoorva
  1. Date: 9/27/2012 5:41:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading this poem.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/27/2012 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nice,thank you Vesna
  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:17:00 PM

    Great advice and write Richard! Your girls are lucky to have a daddy like you. Hugs

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/25/2012 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    they think so too,lol,thanks much Cecillia
  1. Date: 9/7/2012 10:58:00 AM

    This is soo meaningful(: an eye opening poem for girls. Especially my age(:

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/7/2012 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Pavitra,that was the intent
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 9:35:00 PM

    very good poetry. I always enjoy reading your stuff. Cindy

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/7/2012 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Cindy,keep reading
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:47:00 PM

    I really like this, sooo true

    Lee Avatar Bree Lee Date: 9/3/2012 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Check out my poem Dear Girl, Just posted it :) thanks
    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/2/2012 12:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Kelsey
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 5:36:00 AM

    Wish i had read this when i was younger, Richard, i've only twin granddaugthers, I enjoyed this lesson, thank you.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 9/1/2012 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you are welcome Harry,thanks
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 9:44:00 AM

    Richard; I like this. coming from a man - I hope they listen. Some people confuse love with sex. True love goes deeper than that. you don't look that old to have daughters that age. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/29/2012 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    they do,thanks Lucilla,in my 40s
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 9:27:00 PM

    I love this poem, Richard. and with not that much experience (im still young) lol i will keep this in mind. thank you for posting it. -Halie lol

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/29/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hope you do saves a lot of stress,lol thanks Halie
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:52:00 PM

    A funny one! and thank heavens not the reality I grew up with!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/27/2012 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hahaha you are the lucky one,thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 8/24/2012 11:53:00 PM

    Awesome. Thanks for sharing - Landor

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/25/2012 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Landor
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 2:50:00 AM

    Love this poem : ) A good advice, it is. Thanks for the reminder of the reality of this life. Have a lovely day!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/23/2012 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    same to you Ayman,thanks much
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 12:49:00 AM

    A not too subtle word of warning to the girls Rich...hope they realize, as I did not, that daddy knows best in these matters!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/23/2012 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sorry I took so long to post,proberly I would have saved you,lol,thanks Joy
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 7:36:00 PM

    WoW! Deep one Richard! The truth is inevitable. As a parent of a daughter and a daughter myself, all I can say is...hopefully they pay attention to these words! Loved this!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/17/2012 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks much Doreen,hope they do
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:34:00 PM

    you can talk all you want to.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/16/2012 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hahaha I just did,Situation
  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:05:00 PM

    very good advice to give my own daughter

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/15/2012 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hope she takes heed,thanks Karen
  1. Date: 8/15/2012 6:06:00 PM

    nicely penned.. I loved your poem :) cory

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/16/2012 1:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Cory
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:50:00 PM

    Aww, ur daughters all grown ups. A very great message. :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/15/2012 9:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Dinda
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:16:00 PM

    Paternal & passionate Richard - There is the illusion of love, and then the real essence; your daughters are lucky to share your heart - J.A.B.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/15/2012 9:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks much Justin,they are
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Richard I like this advice to girls, you don't look old enough to have kids of that age....David

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/14/2012 1:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am in my mid 40s don't let my youthful looks fool you,lol lol,thanks David
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Nice and very practical advice you have sketched in this short sweet Poem and thank you for your comments on my Poem. With best wishes...Ravindra

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/14/2012 1:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Rav
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Great advice. Absolutely love this one because it is so true. Keep up the good work!!!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/14/2012 1:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will,thanks much Kerri
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 11:18:00 AM

    It crazy this kind of thing really happens. Love the poem and thanks for the warning.

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 8/14/2012 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i truley understand the hurt of rushed relationships richie, all the fustration and loss and tears of anger can make one crazy, its hurtful not only to ourselfs, but too the children lef behind. xoxoxox babz reality bites LOL.....
    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/14/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it does,so much rushed relationships that doesn't last causing hurt and more hurt,tears and anger,thanks Angelica
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 11:00:00 AM

    Hi Richard yet another write that hit the mark, the young are far to quick to fall in love these days it must be the pace of life, all the best Owen

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 8/14/2012 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Owen,same to you bro
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