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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 2:43:00 PM
    "Says so much it says nothing" brilliant line. This summons up the whole piece. As I'm reading this 5th line mine mind is reading powerful scream as it accents into next line with speech. Last two lines what do you think if it read "Silence a powerful scream, embolden/The loudest voice it's speech, so golden"?

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:12:00 AM
    I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Yasmin. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX we won't hear from our grandson for 3 months after his 3 training courses. Miss him so much.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:42:00 PM
    oh, here I see you had a longer set before reducing it to one stanza for the contest. Too bad you were not able to use both!!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 11:59:00 AM
    Out of 6 lines keep 3 for you and give me the rest three:)

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 11:58:00 AM
    your silence speaks a thousand bloom of resplendent words, my mareey... just beautiful!... have you fully recovered?.. take care and winning huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 10:55:00 AM
    Wow, the power behind the silence that you speak of...but you say it loud and clear, such as we can all hear your words you are saying! Your words are so perfect and say so much, saying exactly how silence behaves: mystifies, enlightens, says nothing, deafens, powerful, emboldens, loud and golden! Such a grandiose poem my friend! I just love the wondrous statement it says! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 10:00:00 AM
    That is either one couplet or a three line it:)How are you Yas?

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:59:00 AM
    Good one....if for Susan's contest,u can't write 3 couplets but only one

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:28:00 AM
    Good, good write. As they say - silence is golden. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:14:00 AM
    Great take on silence Yas...loved the read. How are you?

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 6:22:00 AM
    Hi Yas, very profound words, second couplet my fav, good luck...David

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Hello day and lovely sunshine...+ a beautiful poem from is good. :) - oxox // love Anne-Lise :)