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Black Diamond Night

Black Diamond Night (a coal miner’s cemetery) 

Where the ebony, we call “NIGHT”,
Old black rocks sit under the twilight.
Diamond shape eyes unclear and lonely, 
Sinister through hostile spirits only,

I stumble across these stones without a bone.
A solitary confinement alone,
From a barren zone the light transcend.
Only in time, our minds will mend.

Endless valleys and limitless stones.
These bones- these bones they sit alone.
The abyss, of rotten cavities with no fill,
A system no power can unwell the drill
The blood that passed over without a spill.
Peaks collapse into a spellbinding chill.
They are trapped! They are trapped!
Another diamond in the rough. 
Is what they left.

Obsessed with the dead without a death. 
A death that impatiently awaited their last breath.
Gushing, into the gems of dead chemistry,
Diamonds holding its own intensity,
These lonely graves, on top of sycamore hill.
Coal mining hearts that will never heal.
If only shiny eyes could see?
These lonely bones inside of me!
Moving in every direction possible
Flowing in every direction noticeable.
Sockets without eyes.
Stones hiding under the cobalt skies.
The mad sparkles, the madness dies.
Throughout this mess, we held in the blasphemous.
Intervening lots of gems so miraculous.
  
Into a stone of self-religion,
A black night filled of legions.
Acknowledging the soul's capacity of free.
Near the frail bones that sit alone,
Alone they sit in a morbid home.
Through a path unclear and all alone,
Troubled by the visions of my own stone.
Where the night takes place in the dark. 
The ebony rides under the diamond bark.
Along with the coal miners who never got to see the;
“Diamonds of another day!”

:)

Contest name: Black Diamond Night	
Date: 9/19/2012  
Placement: first place

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  1. Date: 3/27/2014 11:51:00 AM

    Thanks Dr Ram, for the win...xoxoxo xoxoox xoxooxox love PD

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 1:10:00 AM

    Hi, my dearest sis Linda! You drew me in rhapsody as I read once again this exquisite masterpiece of yours and saw it in the winners list. My great honor reading it & sharing the win with u. Biggest hugs my dearest sis & BFF and my huge warmest congratulations once again. TYTYSM for sharing. Before signing off, sending u many hugs & kisses & hope everything is fine with u my dearest sis. Love u. lovelots4evrsis& BFFLeo

  1. Date: 3/22/2014 11:58:00 AM

    Wow!! Brilliant piece from one of the great poet on PS and one of my inspiration. Congratulations on your win friend PD. Have a good day always. (^_______^) hugs from me to you.

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 8:46:00 PM

    Congratulations Linda on another win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 1:58:00 PM

    So nice to see you here and read your creation. Congratulations, RAY

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 1:06:00 PM

    Hi dear linda... Congratulations to you!!! .^_^..no one can ever destroy the only one POET DESTROYER...your poem is not just an art... it's an inspiration!! :')) THank you for all the love and support.... Have a great weekend ahead----->>>> hugs and kisses... bOOm!!! mwaH!! ^__^

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 11:02:00 AM

    How about that Linda, A first place win. I loved reading this poem the first time and I loved reading it again. You are the girl........Hugs.......Roger

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 8:46:00 AM

    Congrats on your win PD

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 7:29:00 AM

    It was a pleasure to read your best and favorite poem. Congrats on the win, linda

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 4:29:00 PM

    Oh my God, Linda, This is a great poem. The more I read of it. The more I was pulled into it. Again, I am Sorry I have not read more of your poems. But that is all changing now.....With love ...And a hug...Roger

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 6:35:00 PM

    Congratulations my Sweet Dark Friend on the win in this contest. i find it's one of your older poems that I had not got to as yet. A good few of older relatives were coalminers so I do appreciate this write. Thanks also for your visits today, made me laugh you did lol.Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 8:35:00 AM

    This is a beautiful poem Linda... such vivid images laced through your words...congrats on your first place win :) hugs

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 7:44:00 AM

    WoW, amazing PD, amazing. Congratulations on your well deserved win

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 12:07:00 PM

    congrats my sweet sis PD................Sid

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 2:32:00 AM

    I Praise IT AS WELL...You ARE THE BEST...MY FRIEND!!!...A Well Deserved WINNNNNNNN!!!!!! Soupmail.

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 6:59:00 PM

    CHAR, I was happy to find this poem on your #1 list .... yeah me! I wrote the poem to impress some one special... I know he praised it as well with a #1... hugs and hugs.... xox xox xox xooooxxxooo YEAH ME!!! The Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 4:07:00 PM

    I DEFINITELY remember this gem (diamond) of a poem here Linda...So descriptive, like you had actually visited such a place and wrote this while you were there...Congrats and keep entering contests! - Tim

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 2:37:00 PM

    Congratulations PD for your number 1 poem !!! Well done!!

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 11:15:00 AM

    you went deep with this beautiful write, PD... congrats on your top winning slot!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:09:00 AM

    Congrats, pd, on this great win!!

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 6:32:00 AM

    To gift you with praise is such an easy thing to do....so I join the rest in judging you the best.... Congratulations.... Jake

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 4:50:00 AM

    Hi, my dearest sis and BFF! My super big hearty congratulations on your well-deserved first place win on this stellar masterpiece of yours! I'm so so happy for u! Cheers and biggest hugs! So honored to read and enjoy again this poem. By the way, I was @ school when I peeked here but when the head called for a meeting I logged off. Now, I'm home but I'll be back here later. I'll check if I've the agility of mind to write poem today ;))).Talk to u again later. Sending u many hugs! lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 11:18:00 PM

    Well diamonds are a girl's best friend .

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 8:34:00 PM

    Fantastic word choices. I love the surprise ending. Congrats on your win, Linda! : )

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 4:46:00 PM

    this was never going to be anything other than a 1st place, pd! stunning imagery and use of language, it captivated me from first line to last...congrats! :)

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:52:00 PM

    Fantastic piece of work, Linda. I can relate so well to this! I often feel like I am living in everlasting darkness. Because, people don't get to see who I really am. Instead, they just look at me, and judge me accordingly. It is so frustrating and annoying!...You might like my poem, "Lonely Soul"...Thank you so much for all of the encouraging comments. It is truly appreciated, my friend!

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:45:00 AM

    Thank you Linda for the nice review

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:39:00 AM

    Diamonds are radiating from my screen.. returning congrats in diamonds.

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:07:00 AM

    great write linda.congrats on your win

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 9:46:00 PM

    Powerful and very dark. You deserved a win for this one. Congratulations... Jack

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