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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 3:42:00 PM

    Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sorry to hear of the illness in your life..I have remembered you and yours in my prayers..Sara

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 11:19:00 AM

    Congrats David!! cheers!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:58:00 AM

    Congratulations David , this made me re read it a few times very nice xx

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:30:00 PM

    Congrats on a great win!

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 8:47:00 PM

    DAVID;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 8:02:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, David! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 6:01:00 PM

    Well done David, I will miss your poems, I wish I had more time with you. Lee

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:35:00 PM

    Congrats on your win David. It is an awesome feeling to be in the presence of one loved. Blessings and one love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 1:04:00 PM

    very nicely done, DAvid. thinking of you today and keeping you in my prayers. Congrats on your win here.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Very nice David... Congratulations on your win... Terry

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:39:00 AM

    i like this one David...thanks for sharing (^_^) Have a nice day!! **Mary**

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 4:56:00 PM

    This is diamondly so cool. Sorry, this poem is so cool, that it is making my spelling shake out of order. Lol Kingfemi

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 4:53:00 PM

    This is daimondly cool. Lol Kingfemi

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 3:27:00 AM

    and the goood hormones kicked, david.. delighted angle on the theme!..:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:25:00 PM

    YES!!! Methinks Susan will love this one.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:57:00 PM

    love this romantic write, David

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 10:48:00 AM

    nice write David...Joseph

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:00:00 AM

    Hey! Dat some kinda person you lookin' at. Dave

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 8:34:00 AM

    Wow wee nice xx email let me know if you don't get it I will then soup mail xx

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 8:23:00 AM

    Awesome, David. I stand admiring this poem!! Thank u for your uplifting comments!! Jag

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:05:00 AM

    Hell of a lot said here, David, brilliant.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 6:31:00 AM

    Short and sweet but speaks volumes.. nicely done. thanks for stopping by my work. cory

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:52:00 AM

    But, I will not admire this verse in silence ... terrific couplet. Adrenalin as a result of a love is the best kind. Joe

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:26:00 AM

    Ops! This is another wonderful poem you've penned, David! I love it and I'm pretty sure you really got a lot of adrenalin yesterday for composing 4 poems ! LOL. By the way, congratulations again for well-done poems and thank you very much as well for congratulating me in my win. Good luck always my friend!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:42:00 PM

    YES!!! This is GREAT! I Love it :-) The rest of the poem is poem.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:54:00 PM

    And you turn our world into a happier place with each generous comment. Many thanks, David for your kindness! Lovely couplet!!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 4:22:00 PM

    Truly a fascinating experience that is when you are with the one you love so much, just standing in silence between the two of you, knowing you share something so special! I just love the intimate silence I share with my wife when we have those special moments together! Your poem exudes just this moment when standing, sitting, laying together with our loved one! Perfect piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 4:14:00 PM

    Very moving David. Best wishes for you in the contest. Big hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 3:48:00 PM

    What a lover. Do all men think like that? Lol. Just wonder. Love ya, Toquyen