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A Rush of Silence


You turned my world upside down with just your presence
Adrenalin rushed to my head, I stood admiring in silence!

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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/29/2012 10:01:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest David. Love, Carol
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/27/2012 3:42:00 PM
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    Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sorry to hear of the illness in your life..I have remembered you and yours in my prayers..Sara
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/27/2012 11:19:00 AM
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    Congrats David!! cheers!! (^_^)
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/26/2012 6:58:00 AM
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    Congratulations David , this made me re read it a few times very nice xx
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/25/2012 10:30:00 PM
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    Congrats on a great win!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/25/2012 8:47:00 PM
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    DAVID;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 8/25/2012 8:02:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win, David! Love, Kim
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    Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/25/2012 6:01:00 PM
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    Well done David, I will miss your poems, I wish I had more time with you. Lee
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 8/25/2012 5:35:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win David. It is an awesome feeling to be in the presence of one loved. Blessings and one love. Joy Wells
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 8/25/2012 2:24:00 PM
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    congrats on your win David...missing your presence here,wishing and praying and hoping for miracles from God,they can happen you know,just keep the faith...it will be okay...
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/25/2012 1:04:00 PM
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    very nicely done, DAvid. thinking of you today and keeping you in my prayers. Congrats on your win here.
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 8/25/2012 10:41:00 AM
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    Very nice David... Congratulations on your win... Terry
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/17/2012 5:39:00 AM
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    i like this one David...thanks for sharing (^_^) Have a nice day!! **Mary**
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    femi joey oloidi
    Date: 8/14/2012 4:56:00 PM
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    This is diamondly so cool. Sorry, this poem is so cool, that it is making my spelling shake out of order. Lol Kingfemi
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    femi joey oloidi
    Date: 8/14/2012 4:53:00 PM
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    This is daimondly cool. Lol Kingfemi
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 8/14/2012 3:27:00 AM
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    and the goood hormones kicked, david.. delighted angle on the theme!..:) hugggs!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/13/2012 7:25:00 PM
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    YES!!! Methinks Susan will love this one.
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    jack horne
    Date: 8/13/2012 1:57:00 PM
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    love this romantic write, David
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    Joseph May
    Date: 8/13/2012 10:48:00 AM
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    nice write David...Joseph
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    daver austin
    Date: 8/13/2012 9:00:00 AM
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    Hey! Dat some kinda person you lookin' at. Dave
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/13/2012 8:34:00 AM
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    Wow wee nice xx email let me know if you don't get it I will then soup mail xx
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 8/13/2012 8:23:00 AM
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    Awesome, David. I stand admiring this poem!! Thank u for your uplifting comments!! Jag
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    harry horsman
    Date: 8/13/2012 7:05:00 AM
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    Hell of a lot said here, David, brilliant.
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    cory long
    Date: 8/13/2012 6:31:00 AM
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    Short and sweet but speaks volumes.. nicely done. thanks for stopping by my work. cory
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    Joe Flach
    Date: 8/13/2012 4:52:00 AM
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    But, I will not admire this verse in silence ... terrific couplet. Adrenalin as a result of a love is the best kind. Joe
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 8/13/2012 4:26:00 AM
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    Ops! This is another wonderful poem you've penned, David! I love it and I'm pretty sure you really got a lot of adrenalin yesterday for composing 4 poems ! LOL. By the way, congratulations again for well-done poems and thank you very much as well for congratulating me in my win. Good luck always my friend!
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    Doreen Wright
    Date: 8/12/2012 11:42:00 PM
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    YES!!! This is GREAT! I Love it :-) The rest of the poem is history...hot poem.
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 8/12/2012 8:54:00 PM
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    And you turn our world into a happier place with each generous comment. Many thanks, David for your kindness! Lovely couplet!!
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 8/12/2012 4:22:00 PM
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    Truly a fascinating experience that is when you are with the one you love so much, just standing in silence between the two of you, knowing you share something so special! I just love the intimate silence I share with my wife when we have those special moments together! Your poem exudes just this moment when standing, sitting, laying together with our loved one! Perfect piece, Great Work!!
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 8/12/2012 4:14:00 PM
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    Very moving David. Best wishes for you in the contest. Big hugs, Gail
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