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Right or Wrong

Right or Wrong?

If I were right?
Yet you felt Wrong
Would it mean you didn't belong?

Could I ever be right?
If I judged you wrong?
Would it mean I didn't belong?

Did God make me right?
Or did He make you wrong?
If so where would God belong?

If I were an expressions of light?
You a magnificent expressions of night?
Where would that illusive wrong or right belong?

Diana Dalton
1 April 2008

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  1. Date: 9/25/2012 9:41:00 AM

    Imaginative write makes one think. Maybe we should just leave the judging up to God

    Dalton Avatar Diana Dalton Date: 9/25/2012 11:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow thanks You got it, great!
  1. Date: 9/9/2012 8:17:00 AM

    wonderful lines!

    Dalton Avatar Diana Dalton Date: 9/10/2012 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for you kind words!
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 3:28:00 PM

    many questions here, with a thought provoking poem,

    Dalton Avatar Diana Dalton Date: 9/10/2012 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you harry!
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:10:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Diana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    Dalton Avatar Diana Dalton Date: 8/16/2012 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Carol!
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Diana, it's so great to see you posting here. I enjoyed reading this. I enjoyed the way you made this about right and wrong. yes, answers are too often elusive!!

    Dalton Avatar Diana Dalton Date: 8/12/2012 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I have been trying to find my way around the soup
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Well written Diana - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Dalton Avatar Diana Dalton Date: 8/12/2012 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne!
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:36:00 AM

    Diana now there is a question! I like this...David

    Dalton Avatar Diana Dalton Date: 8/12/2012 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and the Answer?