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Swirlism

Swirly and curly,
Wiggles and spots,
irrational, irritable thoughts,
Raw feelings,
Limbo,
idealistic thought patterns,
Sense of muddle,
Memory full.

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  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:03:00 PM
    Wow! You just described my muddled brain! LOL Wake up in the morning and wonder what strange stories it has in store for me! Do you think I need help??? LOL Love and hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan
    Date: 9/10/2012 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awww like wise Jack xx we prob need help the both of us, never mind we are good, life is good muddled brain and all love and best wishes Amanda xx
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 6:56:00 AM
    i feel a headache building in your words.

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan
    Date: 8/12/2012 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh dear sorry Joann ;( I can see how though.Muddled head=headache!!!!!! I have a muddled head at the best of times, am I am sure most ppl do at some point in there lives unless they are extremely lucky. Hope you liked it though thanks Amanda xx :)
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:37:00 AM
    Amanda this sounds like inside my head...David

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan
    Date: 8/12/2012 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Me too David, that's why it came to me reasonably easily!!! Hope your head gets unmuddled xxxxxx Amanda :))