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GOODBYE KISSING

Hairs stand
On the nape of my neck
As I lean towards you
Butterfly wings fluttering
Your slightest touch
Has always tickled my soul

Through this kiss
Our souls has welded together
At this moment
We reside under the roof
Of inseparable

I've never kissed you
Out of lust
Only for the taste of love
And trust
Vowed, until returning to dust
Which insures God smiling at us

Like seasons, people change
We did, for the better
And spiritual growth
What we didn't anticipate
Is our life changing

This marathon of life
That I've ran
Has crossed its finish line
Fluffy pillows where I lay
Comes with the death bed
Aware, tomorrow will not come
My total existence
Is in this moment

As you lean over
My death bed
To kiss me
I pucker up
For the one thing
I've always lived for
Your kiss

At that moment
I feel the love
While I exit my body
Every ounce of strength
I possessed
Is in that kiss

My soul stands there
Looking at us kiss
Hurting, because
My wife doesn't hear my soul saying
Goodbye!

By, The Scribe 
For PD'S Kissing Game

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:11:00 AM

    found this way down your list,, a winner too, awesome and an exceptional poem,,,

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 6:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest Scribe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:32:00 AM

    Brother loving this poem, the tone isnt too serious like most poems of this theme. Every word expressed so beautifully. *smiles* ron

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 9:53:00 AM

    A very great, and touching win. Congratulations. It was truly and beautifully written.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 12:50:00 AM

    You wow me on this goodbye kiss! Written with feelings! I won't be surprise if this piece bags a prize. Congrats. Dalila

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 8:32:00 PM

    A very well deserved win this was!! Congrats.

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your win,Poet! Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 10:50:00 AM

    A wonderful heartfelt write Scribe! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 5:47:00 AM

    Congrats fam on your win!!! You of all people should be aware that I was intimidated by this one...I told you that I wasn't going to enter bc of this piece!!! It's still #1!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 1:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Scribe xx

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 10:42:00 PM

    PD made a good choice with this one. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 10:24:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in PD's contest. Knew you had a special poem here.

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:10:00 PM

    Very touching poem congrats on your special win hugs vie

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:00:00 PM

    Scribe, Congratulations with your wonderful and awesome entry. Thank you for supporting my kissing game contest. Good night~ :* PD

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 8:58:00 PM

    I'm still crossing my fingers on this one scoring high. I came here thinking it had been in the other kiss contest and was relieved to find it was in the contest not judged yet!

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:15:00 PM

    This manner of writting is certainly why Deity made poetry a Divine craft Scribe -a truly beautiful Odyssey you have construed here - this composition makes me so hungry to kiss Deity, for any reason possible! the second & third verses are just ladden with original talent! With respect - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:20:00 PM

    great write Scribe,sad,but nicely done

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:18:00 PM

    A chaste loved wonderfully penned. It's a very high thought. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 12:23:00 PM

    ouchie yet so beautifully, warmly crafted, marlon.. i like this poetic side of you, ohhh.. win it!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:34:00 PM

    This is one of a kind poem, sad but very beautiful. Thanks for sharing. LUcilla

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 1:04:00 PM

    Beautiful.......

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:25:00 AM

    Wow, this one has to make it to the winner's list Marlon, what a stunning ending.. I didn't see that coming.. love it!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:10:00 AM

    soupmail :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:01:00 AM

    oh my, this stuns me in its most intimate wordings and emotional feel, marlon.. a sure winner!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:52:00 AM

    Scribe, this is stunning, I like it very much...David

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 12:06:00 AM

    oh, MY what a heart wrenching good bye. this is really awesome!! I am glad I stopped by for the read.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 9:35:00 PM

    Aha!! You took my Goodbye Kissing!! : ) Excellent write, Marlon! Best of luck in PD's contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 7:48:00 PM

    Amazing write fam!!!! Toooo good...love how you ended it!!! Excellent...unfortunately I won't be competing with you!!! Good luck in the contest.

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    Good looking Fam! Just keep burning....
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    Great way to come back and bring the heat!!
  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:31:00 PM

    Hello Scribe, i'm taking a tiny peek at your poem. Thank you for the support. I'm just now reading all my comments... I was amazed by one of your comments... I think you misunderstood me, when I said LOL..i was actually laughing at myself and the thought that i have not posted anything in a while. and yet, i was demanding a new poem from you. I know we all have our reasons why we cant post weekly or daily. I hope all things are good with you. Thank you for your awesome comment. always~ XOX~PD

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:10:00 PM

    Outstandingly beautiful my dear, bravo! vie

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