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Swimming Pool Kiss

Romantic evening
Its perfect,just the two of us
Its almost like dreaming
We`re floating away, no fuss

A gentle breeze
Playing softly with your naked body
A tight gentle squeeze
The feeling of embracing something holy

Pool water covered with red roses
A smiling full moon,even sends a wink,wink
Its the perfect evening as love we exposes
Red roses colors the water wild pink

You`re in my arms
At the corner of the pool
Giving you all I have..all my charms
Swimming pool kiss,tonight love`s the rule

pd`s kissing game contest

August 11th 2012

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  1. Date: 5/5/2013 3:08:00 PM

    YUP! Still a breath taker. I love the swimming pool theme you picked... he he he.. Makes me think you have experience this more than twice.. LOL I like the full moon winking at what he is patiently provoking at the moment. xox~ Tiger Tex.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 5/6/2013 12:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:49:00 AM

    Hi my dear friend Arild! Nice to hear from you again! How are you? I've been searching for your poems which I've missed & this is one of them; so I stopped by here. Indeed, this is a very romantic and great write which I am so delighted to read. I can see it won, lol. My belated congrats my dear friend Arild! Thank you so much for sharing & your precious time reading my latest poem. I'm glad you liked it & I know you love travelling ;)). Thanks a lot again and have a great weekend! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest Arild. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:58:00 PM

    Big congrats here, ARild. A well deserved win it was!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 5:07:00 PM

    I got to get me a swimming it! Congrats on your win. Hugs

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 9:02:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 6:06:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Arild!!!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 1:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Arild xx

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 10:54:00 PM

    What a nice write. No wonder it won in PD's contest. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:02:00 PM

    Arlid ,, Congratulations with your wonderful and sweet entry. Thank you for supporting my kissing game contest. Good night~ :* PD

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 5:13:00 AM

    Now go get out of the pool and take an ice cold shower! This is as steamy as it gets! :) g.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 7:41:00 AM

    A very sweet and imagery, Arild. Good luck in the contest. I love the last verse :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 3:14:00 PM

    A delightful, sensuous read. Whew!! (Wiping my brow). An excellent entry in PD's contest. The very best of luck to you, Arild. :)

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 3:01:00 PM

    Good luck ...Reads like a winner to me..That would be romantic with rose petals floating on the pool..Sara

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Whew!!...Got me breathing a little heavy here, Arild! Red roses turning the water pink...nice! - Tim

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:06:00 PM

    wow,now THAT's a GREAT pool kiss. I really like where you took this one,Arild. Awesome.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 4:00:00 PM

    Oh, how romantic. I love it. Beautiful, Arild. Good luck with the contest. It's a winner in my book :)) Love, Toquyen

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 3:40:00 PM

    A creative poem

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:06:00 AM

    i want to float on your spellbinding pool of words and images, arild... a fav and a winner.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:54:00 AM

    Arild I wish I could swim after reading this, excellent entree my freind, good luck..David

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 4:27:00 AM

    Hi Arild very provocative write with great imagery I like it good luck in the comp my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 9:41:00 PM

    Holy Swimming Cow!! Terrific! The last stanza is fantastic, Arild! It's a winner; PD will love this entry. My best wishes. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:42:00 PM

    Whew!!! This poem is pretty hot even though you two are in cool water. lol I love your poem Arild and it reads like winning material for PD's contest. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 4:58:00 PM

    such a romantic - roses on the pool and moonlight. best to your and your lovely wife.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 4:54:00 PM

    This is beautiful.. good luck in the contest with this gem.. Thank you for all your warm comments on my work.. I look forward to each and every one. cory

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 3:17:00 PM

    This is so steamy, your turning the pool into a sauna! Excellent write poet!

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 8/13/2012 10:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:55:00 PM

    yep, the plan was to change it ;) no worries.. Love & hugs CTC

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:48:00 PM

    hey Arild, I am doing good thanks hey.. How be you? A romantic write for the contest, wishing you all the best with this gem.. Thanks for your comment on Tapestry, it didn't make it to the list but I still love it ;) love & hugs CTC

    Neels Avatar Wilma Neels Date: 8/12/2012 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Arild :)
    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 8/11/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I loved too,Wilma;)
  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Just read some of that wacko's comments on Dave's poem. Amazing if this person is still in here ala D__k .. Interesting just when the soup is simmering some Crazy person over seasons.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 8/11/2012 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nothing surprises me here anymore my friend..
  1. Date: 8/11/2012 12:31:00 PM

    This is awesome..thanks for sharing the romantic atmosphere :) SK