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Early Adventure

I find the need for an early adventure
A breath of air so graceful and free
There’s never any doubt about life
We all get along, all peaceful ties

A breath of air so graceful and free
A powerful time, of hope and kindness
We all get along, all peaceful ties
We don’t find pain, just some loss

A powerful time, of hope and kindness
Sharing a love unheard of even before
We don’t find pain, just some loss
It’s a record of times beating on us all

Sharing a love unheard of even before
There’s never any doubt about life
It’s a record of times beating on us all
I find the need for an early adventure

Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:44:00 PM

    A wonderful poem you penned here Russell. Hugs, Gail Best wishes in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:09:00 PM

    beautiful pantoum, Russell - I find this form very difficult, but you make it look so easy