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I Have Fallen

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I Have Fallen

I never
          saw the
                      stars
                             before.. 
                                       I
                                       walked
                                       with a chip and a
                                       inner fear of heartache..
                                                     Then
                                                        I
                                                      fell,
                                                        I
                                                fell so hard..
                                                        I
                                       couldn't stand without
                                                     you..
                                                  Because
                                  I have fallen in love with you...
                                    
                                   

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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 12:16:00 AM
    WOW - we all want some of what you got LOL. - Shaz

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:06:00 PM
    I love this ;}

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:02:00 PM
    Good write! It happens to us all...

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:37:00 PM
    That is exactly the way it happens too. Great write here Michael, I can relate :-)

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:40:00 AM
    Great reason to fall Michael; doesn't get any better than this!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:59:00 PM
    awee..pd

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:54:00 PM
    I love the formation...like falling down the stairs in love. Great job Michael

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 4:43:00 PM
    men can be romantic. Nice way to end the day.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:52:00 PM
    hello MJF, you sure have fallen hey? Absolutely love the feel you create with this gem of yours.. Enjoyed this ;) love & hugs CTH

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:03:00 PM
    Oh brother..you`ve fallen in love,big time! Think I better start wearing them chips too my friend:) 10 on the rating for this one,Michael!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 12:01:00 PM
    this was beautifully written.. You paint such a strong picture of love cory

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 7:08:00 AM
    This is how I felt with my wife when we first met Michael, you have pictured it for me perfectly my friend! What a romantic write, I just love it a lot! This visual is so perfect, it paints a perfect graphic of someone falling, especially with the "I's" within it! This is such a grandiose piece, wonderfully put together! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:14:00 AM
    lovely powerful and emotional

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Ohhhh.....so sweet Michael, love you to !!!! :) oxox // Anne-Lise <3

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:09:00 AM
    Beautiful way of starting my day, love vie