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The war

Some days the pain is so great That all you want to do is break. No matter what you say It will not make the pain and confusion go away. Living in two worlds challenges you. Who you are one day isn’t who you are another day. Constantly searching for a path to follow. Looking for a something to fill the emptiness Feel the void in your chest As you tackle one more step. People say they understand. And people say they care for you. Do you know how it feels? To walk the fine line your mind has created. To have an out pouring of emotions, To hide by yourself and away from the world. While you fight to stay afloat. Nothing is easy in this world Nothing comes without fighting for S o now it’s time to win the war.

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  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:19:00 PM
    Harry is right on this one although I disagree on his comments defending "D__k" back in May when he had no idea the amount of nasty things that were written to me and many other male soupers on here. Wonderful piece. Sorry to vent but had to say this. Hugs Michael a collab would be very nice.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 3:27:00 PM
    A very good poem Cory - well done. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 2:52:00 PM
    the fact that you wrote this wonderful poem, tells one the war is being won, enjoyed this