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A Wreath on Dusk

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A Wreath on Dusk

How often I have watched the sun descending into dusk, and dusk, absorbing sun, exudes bright flavors for the eye. It's eye candy, often variegated, splendid in its hue. Those hues, dessert at end of day, sweeten with succulent delight. What delight in skies of mango, cantaloupe or marmalade, a marmalade of tangerine with raspberry mixed in! Sometimes in vanilla skies are Crème brûlée or honeyed gold; golden dollops of meringue above a lemon ball of sun. Other times, sun lies concealed by clouds in chocolate skies, or chocolate with the purple-gray of poi in cotton candy wisps of pink - pink or bright red cherry heavens, sometimes luscious plum - that plum reflected in blueberry seas; what treat in watching dusk! by Andrea Dietrich/written Aug. 9, 2012 For PD's Nature Contest

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  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:51:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win Utah lady xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "Wreath" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:32:00 AM

    Excellent and beautiful piece,Andrea....Congratulations on your superb win...Kudos to you..Great write,lady..

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 8:34:00 PM

    I love the fruit mentioned...thewhole poem is a winner. Congrats to you!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:50:00 AM

    Andrea belated congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 5:28:00 PM

    congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 1:46:00 PM

    ((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 11:08:00 AM

    Love it again!!A big congratulations on your win in the contest Andrea.Honoured to share the same spot with you.

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 9:02:00 AM

    i could taste the flavors of your kind of dusk , andie, and feel the beauty of such night in every line.. what an amazing wreath!.. clap, clap to you for your honeyed win in my contest!.:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 8:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Bright red cherry heavens My goodness your dressed to the sevens With your beautiful penmanship This is a steam ship Woooo Hooooo! Nice Win Love, Vie

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 7:30:00 AM

    Congrats to you dear Andrea on this win with you awesome wreath!

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 7:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on yur creative wreath. i would like to try this form again.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:54:00 AM

    Love the flavor of this wonderful poem Andrea. love phyl

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 2:39:00 AM

    I came back and FAV this one!!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:37:00 PM

    Tastey Andrea - I want to come over for desert! J.A.B.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 2:52:00 PM

    You've opened my eyes to the sunsetting sky's with your delectable turning to nights. I had no idea there was such a sea of dimming the daily lights. I'm too busy watching all the reality botching. In the evening crap on tv. Which stands to reason in this time of season we should just go outside and see. Luck! :):)

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:27:00 AM

    I just did a delightful drowning in your huge fruit bowl. Deeeelicious! Luck in the contest. daver

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:18:00 AM

    From all spheres of the Sun's colour during the dusk beautifully pictured where eyes feel really alike. Loved the reading and wish you best in the contest. Always, bl

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:20:00 PM

    i want some of that raspberry licorice. tasty wreath.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:44:00 PM

    wow, a tasty write here, my friend - a big winner for sure

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 12:13:00 PM

    Great contest entry Andrea, never tasted sky before.." ( best wishes )

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 10:11:00 AM

    Revisiting this one ...almost 20 syllables in each line......it brings a slow rhythm while I read the poem.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 9:00:00 AM

    Water Dance on fb is open to the public and I have elected not to limit people to LIKE first before they may view my posts. I hope you enjoy it - as much as I appreciate you taking your time in instructing me in the use of syllable counts. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 4:54:00 AM

    An awesome write here.....such a colorful poem...Love it!

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 11:44:00 PM

    Re your comment on my "gg" poem: I did find a write up of George Herbert on PoemHunter.com. Also, Nette's example and the actual poem illustrates the reversal of the last 4 line's words and the repetition of the opening line, in the last line. Maybe it is the mathematician in me that easily finds patterns in words and nature... I will elaborate on it on my fb page, Water Dance. This is a difficult assignment. I, also, wrote DUSK, and illustrated it. It is now posted on my Timeline. Luv, Suzette

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/11/2012 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops, I thought I was responding to Yesha's comment underneath this one! But it's the same topic!
    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/10/2012 11:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yesha. I just don't understand. I went back and checked the example poem. and the originator of this form did not do his wreath form that way you and Suzette are saying. What am I not seeing???
  1. Date: 8/10/2012 11:40:00 PM

    Wow! Andrea you paint a yummy picture of dusk here. But yes I think too that the first word/words of the poem should be the last too. Just check dear..good luck to you!

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 9:59:00 PM

    A real fantastic write from a great poet like you, Andrea. I am sure this wins! I have enjoyed reading it. Good luck always!

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 7:36:00 PM

    Well...YUM!:) A great sensory write, Andrea. Love the bright and colourful imagery. Thanks for the comment, I didn't use a translator, but I'm thinking I've made a couple of errors.:( Best wishes, and lots of fun with that contest!! love, Mikki

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 3:49:00 PM

    this was awesome Andrea, like it!! good luck in the contest..Hugs Laila

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