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WISHING ON A SHOOTING STAR

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WISHING ON A SHOOTING STAR

Just wishing on a shooting star Shimmery streak in the night sky Wistful eyes, clasped palms, mouth ajar Countless desires piling up high Mesmerized heart has stopped beating Just wishing on a shooting star Timeless moment, am savoring Fly me away to dreamland far Realms of real life drift afar Stack of suppressed dreams form towers Just wishing on a shooting star Let there be meteor showers! One silver strand for each sweet wish Sprinkling glitter from God's gold jar Soaking in the heavenly bliss Just wishing on a shooting star 10/8/2012

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  1. Date: 8/24/2012 1:55:00 AM

    congratulations and beautifully penned.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 6:07:00 PM

    How lovely to share the spot with YOU. Congrad's on this winning write. Light & love

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:20:00 PM

    Congrats on your win...Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:11:00 PM

    Congrats on your first place win, Yesha! I love the quatern form and you have done it beautifully!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda PS Soupmail...

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:27:00 AM

    excellent poem!! congratulations for being a winner!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hugs!! **Mary**

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 8:07:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win Yesha xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 6:44:00 AM

    A bit congratulations on your first place win!!!!! Wow Well deserved sweetie. Luv, Gail

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 6:10:00 AM

    Absolutely charming quatern, Yesha...'sprinkling glitter from God's gold jar'...beautiful!...Congratulations and have a blessed day - Tim

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:03:00 AM

    what a wonderful winner, Yesha. enjoyed.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:25:00 AM

    Yesha just superb big congrats..David

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:19:00 AM

    you are a star, yesh!.. greeeat job!...congrats!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 12:03:00 AM

    Awesome and Impressive presentation,Yesha..This is so..good...Great work...Kudos to you,Lady...Congratulations on your super win....Well deserved....Love OLU

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 8:24:00 PM

    wow, yesha, there you are again and this time ON TOP. Just like your dazzling shooting star. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 7:52:00 PM

    Congratulations Yesha on your First Win!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:45:00 PM

    congrats on your super win Yesha

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:23:00 PM

    Clasped palms, mouth ajar at this beautiful poem!! Congratulations are well deserved !!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Congrats on your first place finish in my contest with this gem!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:56:00 PM

    love this beauty, Yesha

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 6:52:00 PM

    fantastic and dreamy, yash.. this is a wonner!..:) huggs

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 8/10/2012 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *winner*
  1. Date: 8/10/2012 4:34:00 PM

    Yesha, your poetry progression is impressive,each new poem is amazing!!!!!This is a great one . love it. Your friend Anne

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 12:22:00 PM

    I really love that one part: let there be meteor showers. That was a great rhyme for towers! Oh, and the last stanza. What pure delight!!! awesome imagery.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 10:00:00 AM

    Yesha, excellent lines, I love this from, well done...David

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 5:23:00 AM

    Hmmmmmnnnn.... wonderfully and creatively written, Yesha. I hope you will win in the contest. Good luck and best wishes always my dear friend.