two worlds colliding

forces of evil
drop boulders in lake of love
pebbles expand hope

vitriolic words
appeal to lowest nature
rudderless leaders




james marshall goff
two worlds colliding contest

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Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/7/2012 6:54:00 AM good one Jimbo!! Thanks for your comments....I am glad to know I encouraged you....I didn't realize it has been 3 years.....
Cindy Cayton Date: 9/5/2012 8:33:00 PM Nice senryu. Enjoyable evening read... Cindy
Sara Kendrick Date: 8/18/2012 2:31:00 PM Got a chuckle when I read it again..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/16/2012 5:55:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol
Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2012 11:46:00 PM JAMES, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD
Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/12/2012 6:31:00 PM Love how you GOT the 3rd line to take the reader somewhere else so much in so few words. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/12/2012 11:13:00 AM Hey, CONGRATS to you on your win, and now I have to get ready for church!!!
David Williams Date: 8/12/2012 2:32:00 AM Jimbo congrats on your great win....David
Kim Merryman Date: 8/11/2012 11:38:00 AM Great write, James! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
Richard Palmer Date: 8/11/2012 9:16:00 AM great write James
Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2012 8:14:00 AM Great work..Winner for sure if the contest hasn't been judged..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
yasmin khan Date: 8/10/2012 5:23:00 AM this is a a very intellectually creative haiku,Jimbo,i seen you round but never gotround to visiting your page,thank you for your kind words on my poem.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/9/2012 8:28:00 PM GREAT reflective senryu, james. I especially like the twist on that first one.
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/9/2012 9:42:00 AM Good, well done for the contest James - hope you win....luck....luck !!! - oxox huggs Anne-Lise :))
Ruben O. Date: 8/8/2012 11:15:00 PM Best of luck in the contest, James! How are you, my friend?