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A Sad Good-Bye

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A Sad Good-Bye

You turned and walked away
shoulders slumped, eyes downcast,
the morning air was still;
bright sun crept through the slats
of window's crooked shades
like the eye lids of dawn.

Like the eye lids of dawn
I saw your tears falling,
wanting to touch your face
it was too late you had
closed the door on our love.

12:11 a.m.
Feb. 19, 2011

C. Alvez

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:00:00 PM
    My Interpertation, I'm sure is different.. Right On!! It's obvious why you're my only fave so far.. No disrespect to any others.. Pen on.. TC: Thats funny, the validate letters are TERR, maybe ive drank too much... LOL My name is terry.. HA!!!

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 9:51:00 PM
    thats so sad... and beautiful.

    Alvez Avatar Cynthia Alvez
    Date: 8/9/2012 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Skyler, Thank you so much for your commet! C. Alvez