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Two Worlds Colliding


Major breakdown
an emergency call
rushing to the plant

on my table
under the candle
an unfinished poem


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By:kash poet

Contest:Two Worlds Colliding

Sponsor:Russell Sivey



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  1. Date: 8/18/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Great topic...Most can relate to this one in some way or another..((()))!!Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:42:00 PM

    KASH, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 1:11:00 AM

    Love this Kash. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:45:00 PM

    yes, I remember really liking this one. Belated congrats, kash.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:30:00 AM

    Wow, I like! a tardy congrats. BG

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 6:29:00 PM

    ah yes sanity? and insanity? health & illness? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:31:00 AM

    Kash, congrats on your great win...I can see it now...David

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:22:00 PM

    Wow!This is awesome.Great write, Kash. Congratulations on your superb win...

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 11:37:00 AM

    Great contrast, Kash. I like it. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 4:29:00 AM

    congrads on your win dada...

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 4:19:00 PM

    Love it!! Perfect contrast!

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 7:56:00 AM

    Hey I did comment on this poem in the morning but see its gone now! Some glitch I guess...I hope you'd put a paper weight on your poem before going! Very well done and excellent entry, wishing you the very best for the contest.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 5:55:00 AM

    a celestial smash this is , kashi bud... the floods have subsided but we are not that safe yet... hope all's well with you... this piece will hit the headlines!..wow!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 1:05:00 AM

    Kash, just excellent ....David

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 11:34:00 PM

    Kash, I really like this poem, your are a wonderful writer...thank you for sharing with the world!!

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 11:32:00 PM

    This contest will be so hard to judge! There are too many great entries! This one is one of them, Kash... Best of luck (you dont need it). Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 9:44:00 PM

    Kash, find the thought epic. one can only hold so much before giving up... good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 9:07:00 PM

    GOOD one, describing the poet's dilemma, trying to write poems despite all the many things he has to attend to. I love where you took the theme. Just posted a poem, there is no way I am staying long tonight!! haha. I did two hours in the afternoon and now I have so much to catch up on in my house. Anyway, I saw your poem posted right under mine. How cool!!