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  1. Date: 8/15/2012 9:04:00 AM

    This was a wonderful write and full of emotion..loved it! cory

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:31:00 AM

    David for someone who write like this how could you ever think "confused space" was about the inside of your head.. You come up with these imagery filled gems that I can only dream about writing :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:06:00 AM

    Hey, now y in the world would she need your car when she already drives a hot lookin' Mustang?...I am too embarrassed to tell u what I drive...hahahah. I told u I am moving and will not be on here much...right?...This poem is outstanding, young man..very good work!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 4:50:00 AM

    Hi David yes this sums up autumn to a tee, but wish you had not wasted the cider on the floor, have a great sunday and a better week my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Like your poem David. - need some housecleaning....let the sun shine in. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:22:00 PM

    Wow Dave seems like u got A crack pot following u. She uses language like that and is still on the soup?? Amazing. Stay well my friend. Michael

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:06:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your fall and harvest work..It is coming soon..The crops are about finished..Great way of expressing the season..Thanks for stopping by..I went out on the porch for a few minutes this morn and I see we have seen some of the same things..Sara

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:44:00 AM

    Lovely images from across the North Sea,my friend:) Rated you 10 of the max 7 on this one,David.Have a great weekend! Arild

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 12:14:00 PM

    wow, David. I think since I first met you here, I have noticed a growing maturity in your poetry. this kind of writing is so classy. Love that line about corn, earless like the scarecrow!! a festival of flowers, chants to the green man. All such lovely images.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 12:14:00 PM

    was this for any contest?

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 10:03:00 AM

    great write David,your poetry is a heavenly gift

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 4:50:00 AM

    Very nice write filled with gratitude to God. Loved the imagery you paint here, David.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:56:00 PM

    love this one! =Juli-Michelle=

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:03:00 PM

    Enjoyed this David. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:42:00 AM

    Laced with fond memories and thankfulness...each detail is superb and gives your land a sense of coziness...Enchanted write, David. :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:45:00 AM

    Soup mail.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:22:00 AM

    I really like this one great poetry!! Hugs Laila

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:41:00 AM

    Oh to be in England, Oh i forgot i am, after 45 years, and with poetry like this glad to be here.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 8:48:00 PM

    Great poetry I am reading from you tonight, I feel bone tired tonight, and this is so enjoyable, Vie

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 4:11:00 PM

    And the dedication?? Which of us is the most senile??

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 4:05:00 PM

    I give thanks everyday of my life, just a daily ritual of mine! You never know what can happen in any given day, and something usually does, even if it is small! I am really moved by your write here David! I has great meaning deep within it! A deep meaning! Fabulous piece my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 4:00:00 PM

    You was definitely "snook" the first time I viewed it..or I am really that blind? Must be time for my bed too.Nighty nite.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:56:00 PM

    Have you noticed you are about the only one writing comments to me anymore...............................I am just REALLY bad at poetry, or have you used your evil influence somehow?????

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:49:00 PM

    Don't go yet.... you said snook. And the question was about my dedication. if you go to bed now, you will be left with no choice.. Your call..I'm getting far to fond of all these............................

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:38:00 PM

    so lovely..I wish I was in England with you to walk the hill where the White Horse lays in Wiltshire or Haddrians wall at the scottish border!! Maybe some time your family would like aguest? Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:26:00 PM


    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 8/8/2012 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    what question?????
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:23:00 PM

    Just in the door myself. Had my top down until 7pm. Found a gem along a country road today..doesn't the green man hang out down around Devon and Cornwall?. Brought him home with me from there a few years ago.Here we call them" stooks". I hope I am not so far up myself that I am teaching you now..Jean

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Love your poem here David. We all need to take a moment sometimes and just appreciate. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 2:20:00 PM

    A gift we don't always appreciate! Nice poem... Terry