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  1. Date: 8/15/2012 9:04:00 AM
    This was a wonderful write and full of emotion..loved it! cory

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:31:00 AM
    David for someone who write like this how could you ever think "confused space" was about the inside of your head.. You come up with these imagery filled gems that I can only dream about writing :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:06:00 AM
    Hey, now y in the world would she need your car when she already drives a hot lookin' Mustang?...I am too embarrassed to tell u what I drive...hahahah. I told u I am moving and will not be on here much...right?...This poem is outstanding, young man..very good work!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 4:50:00 AM
    Hi David yes this sums up autumn to a tee, but wish you had not wasted the cider on the floor, have a great sunday and a better week my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:05:00 PM
    Like your poem David. - need some housecleaning....let the sun shine in. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Wow Dave seems like u got A crack pot following u. She uses language like that and is still on the soup?? Amazing. Stay well my friend. Michael

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:06:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your fall and harvest work..It is coming soon..The crops are about finished..Great way of expressing the season..Thanks for stopping by..I went out on the porch for a few minutes this morn and I see we have seen some of the same things..Sara

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:44:00 AM
    Lovely images from across the North Sea,my friend:) Rated you 10 of the max 7 on this one,David.Have a great weekend! Arild

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 12:14:00 PM
    wow, David. I think since I first met you here, I have noticed a growing maturity in your poetry. this kind of writing is so classy. Love that line about corn, earless like the scarecrow!! a festival of flowers, chants to the green man. All such lovely images.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 12:14:00 PM
    was this for any contest?

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 10:03:00 AM
    great write David,your poetry is a heavenly gift

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 4:50:00 AM
    Very nice write filled with gratitude to God. Loved the imagery you paint here, David.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:56:00 PM
    love this one! =Juli-Michelle=

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:03:00 PM
    Enjoyed this David. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:42:00 AM
    Laced with fond memories and thankfulness...each detail is superb and gives your land a sense of coziness...Enchanted write, David. :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:45:00 AM
    Soup mail.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:22:00 AM
    I really like this one great poetry!! Hugs Laila

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:41:00 AM
    Oh to be in England, Oh i forgot i am, after 45 years, and with poetry like this glad to be here.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 8:48:00 PM
    Great poetry I am reading from you tonight, I feel bone tired tonight, and this is so enjoyable, Vie

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 4:11:00 PM
    And the dedication?? Which of us is the most senile??