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Crushed

Great sadness is my portion now
I watched you walk away
It seems so unbelievable
I even begged you’d stay

We’ve been together for so long
I can’t believe it’s true
In just a moment all was gone
I’m still in love with you

You said you loved me many times
and that you’d never leave
I gave you everything I had
my heart was on my sleeve

How can you leave me just like this
without a reason why?
Although my heart is breaking now
you will not see me cry

Fictional write

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  1. Date: 8/7/2012 10:18:00 PM

    Jon, you are a master at writing about romantic relationships! Some happy, some sad (like this one), but always emotive and insightful. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:56:00 PM

    A good one about having one's heart broken, Jon. Nice to see this one tonight.

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:49:00 PM

    So sad I am glad it is fiction Jon, hearts like yours aren't meant to be broken, thanks for sharing, vie