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Dusk

Dusk, I wait for you
For you to whisk me away
Away from here, far away from here
Here is my hand, twilight take me down
Down to the river of night to rest
To rest upon the sweet edge of the dusk.


Written by Gina Young 
8/7/12
For the contest Wreath on the Flavor of Dusk by Nette Onclaud

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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 3:31:00 AM

    Gina I love this very romantic write of yours, the men are queuing up can you hear them...David

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 1:18:00 AM

    good poem. I've enjoyed reading - JH

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:38:00 AM

    Gina, a very good poem for the contest, wish you luck and hope for a win for you. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Young Avatar Gina Young Date: 8/9/2012 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank u Anne Lise, its much appreciated!
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 1:43:00 AM

    back again, this really is pure poetry...I love it...David

    Young Avatar Gina Young Date: 8/8/2012 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank u so much David! I wasnt even sure that I was doing it correctly as I had never heard of a wreath poem before. And everything I write is in prose/free verse... I experiment with other types but i just write as the words come and its hard to do that in form. But thanx again!!! You are wonderful!
  1. Date: 8/7/2012 4:36:00 PM

    Gina a good entree, good luck..David