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'The threads of Me''

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'The threads of Me''


Tailor made, 
And to a specific 
Pattern. He knew exactly what He had in mind with me
Even with multicolored fiber
Sometimes I look back in amazement 
Thinking who would have thought, that the grey He started with would
Recoil and blossom 
Years ago the tears I shed; finally I can see the growth

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  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:09:00 AM

    A very nice Acrostic Wilma. Yes we are all tailor made!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:09:00 PM

    Wow! This is a great piece of work. Perfect title. Take care Chris

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Thank you for commenting Wilma; its strange how potential can blossom despite many hardships in life; well expressed piece ( and good to read about your peace. )

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:09:00 AM

    A difficult process that walks with recriminations and angst Wilms.A touching verse that ends well! LOve, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:02:00 AM

    Very touching poem, especially the last line. I try to not post any old poems - they are from a part of me well in the past. But I do sometimes rewrite them in a different form. I never used to use form.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:50:00 PM

    hmm..you changed the title,CTC? Sorry,didn`t realize that contest was over:)

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:23:00 PM

    what a beautiful acrostic, my friend. Have a great weekend lfde

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 12:59:00 PM

    Outstanding write,dear Wilma.How are you,my dear CTC? You`ll definitely top the list with this gem:) Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:36:00 PM

    wow, you did a great job with this one, Wilma. ARe you keeping in touch with Nikko? I sure miss her here.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 5:58:00 AM

    your piece write stirs and heightens the senses, wilms... i don't want to second guess your intent but i feel with you on this... way up to the winning ladder!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 4:40:00 PM

    Wilma, wonderful write, you must be weighed down with the kisses you are recieving, good luck..David

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 1:36:00 PM

    A wonderful Acrostic here.Love it Wilma!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 12:33:00 PM

    Nicely woven, Wilma. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:46:00 AM

    Wilma I always enjoy your artistic talent in every poem you pen. Another powerful write sweetie. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 8:24:00 AM

    Wow, what power you weave into you poem here! i just love the passionate feelings you portray throughout your incredible write my friend! I really enjoyed the flow of your piece here and how you integrated the grey color and created a way to make it colorful even though you never stated it within your write, it was inferred! A very delightful write Wilma, I enjoyed it a lot! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 8:16:00 AM

    Oh, this one is MINT. I can see this getting a gold at the podium! Love it, Wilma. Best wishes in the contest, Cyndi