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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:05:00 AM
    Many years ago Craig, 20 years before i was born. congrats for the win and for sharing that 4th spot with me!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 5:03:00 AM
    congrats on your winning spot Craig xx

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 12:34:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 11:50:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this lovely bittersweet poem written so long ago. Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 6:27:00 AM
    :-D Congrats!

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 4:34:00 AM
    Craig hi a fine poem worthy of winning congrats on a fine win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 12:20:00 AM
    congrats on a great win.read a worthy write. makes great sense. great! (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:44:00 PM
    wow, Craig and to think you wrote this way back in '69 . So wise even in your younger days!!! Congrats on the win. btw, I was still in diapers. JUST KIDDING. I was riding my sting ray bike to junior high and back! And dreaming about my crushes.

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Hola, Craig , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15796&PoetID=18720 Take care --- xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 10:23:00 PM
    this was very beautiful and well written i love how well it all went together

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 7:19:00 PM
    I can almost hear a guitar playing these words. Soft and gentle.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 6:35:00 PM
    i love the comparison with the clown and the blunt line afterward, "it is not your own" sadly i think this desrcibes many of us, we smile when we do not feel happy inside, or smile fakely. nice write. very cute =Juli-Michelle=