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Inhale


Heaving waves lift me
Over ageless moonlit sea –
I inhale the dark 

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:18:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:05:00 AM

    Rhonda, congrats in Brian's contest xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#200" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 9:13:00 PM

    Wow! Congrats Rhonda!

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 4:17:00 PM

    A wonderful haiku, deserving of your win.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 3:56:00 PM

    congrads Rhonda on a super win.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:57:00 PM

    Beautiful and creative! Good write Rhonda :-)

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 10:15:00 AM

    well that's better than inhaling the water, lol! but seriously, nice imagery. I like it. hey, how about another one: exhale...

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 4:00:00 AM

    Awesome imagery in your Haiku, Rhonda, Enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 8:18:00 PM

    WOW!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 9:44:00 AM

    Great imagery here,Rhonda! Deep and strong.Its a gem:) Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 5:48:00 AM

    Oh Wow, this is powerful stuff, just love this. harry

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:38:00 PM

    I can inhale the dark also as long as there's no cigar or cigarette smoke in the dark. Good haiku.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 4:30:00 PM

    So deep and powerful. I enjoyed reading this today sweetie. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 3:44:00 PM

    Very expressive and descriptive work..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 3:09:00 PM

    Rhonda inhaling the beauty of this now,,,David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 3:04:00 PM

    Wow, this poem moves me, and in the good direction Rhonda! I truly love this incredible poem, I'm moved by the descriptions you have laid on me here! Wonderful piece my friend! I just love it! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 2:52:00 PM

    Another pretty, haiku poem Rhonda - You are brilliant!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise