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Two Worlds Colliding

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Two Worlds Colliding

ONE five-minute break
at work playing games, mistake
exaggerated

butterfly dreams cease
cocoon gone in a heartbeat
catepillar weeps


8/5/12
For Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest
Black Eyed Susan

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Susan. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 1:41:00 PM

    What are the two worlds colliding? I like this work but feel some explaining is needed here. Let me know what the two worlds are! Peace & love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 2:20:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:43:00 PM

    SWEET SUSAN, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:50:00 PM

    Belated congratulations, Susan. I remember this creative poem from earlier. Hope to see an email from you tonight!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:36:00 AM

    Susan congrats on your great win....will email some today..David

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:54:00 PM

    Superb write,Susan.Great job,nice going.,Congrats on your win..

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 4:08:00 PM

    Interesting contrasts. Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 8:57:00 AM

    great write...congrats on your win Susan

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 3:42:00 AM

    Strong metaphorical images Susan. Good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:06:00 PM

    Susan, this is sure creative. I really like that second one and the metaphor of the butterfly and caterpillar. thanks for my win. I'm glad you liked what i wrote. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:45:00 PM

    This elicits thoughts of perished innocence - I can relate to this sentiment at this moment - thank you Susan - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 8/6/2012 2:49:00 PM

    Ahh!..Enjoyed this creative and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Hubby still doing good..Some pain but not too bad..Sara

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:23:00 PM

    Good writing by a skilled lady, and a win for the contest. - Have a beautiful new week B.E.S. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:43:00 PM

    Susan I like your take on this one, good luck..David will email you tomo.