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Untitled Triad of Haikus

 
The lone rain puddle  
Catches the shimmering moon  
As it mimics the sun  
    
And mirrors the dreams  
Of our long ago youth  
With days eroded   
    
Like the shores upon   
Which we strolled, listening  
To the crashing waves 
 

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  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Lovely series of haiku.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:08:00 PM

    Beautiful Haikus. I enjoyed reading this.

    Cahill Avatar Jennifer Cahill Date: 8/10/2012 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Sherese, Thank you for reading my poem. I read some of yours and was inspired to attempt a dizain of my own. Strangely, when I reread "That Girl", I realized we both referred to the word "yarn". It was such a coincidence! I hope, if you read my dizain, you did not mind. When I read "That Girl" the first time, I only read the first stanza. Again, I hope you do not mind, and thanks for reading my poem. Jennifer Cahill