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DARE WE

~Dare We~ Side by side in the full moonlight, looking up in wonder Shoulders rubbing, breaths, mingling hands begin to wander Daringly we looked together, would we really dare… No one about we can try, there seem no eyes to stare. Hand in hand we start to hide away from the moonlit sky We really want to do this, but we are feeling rather shy Should we in this moonlight, try to recapture our youth? He takes his shoes and socks off, I am excited now in truth… His pants come down, I kook aghast, “they cost a lot” I heard him say. My shoes and jacket I remove, deciding it's time to play He takes me by the hand; our bodies mingle and turn together We feel so young this moonlit night with outstanding weather. His legs shine white, silhouetted against the moonlit sky Now is the time, there's no one here, I am not letting this pass me by Up and down, slowly, carefully, his body looks so lean I can’t believe we are sneaking a go on our neighbour’s new trampoline...
© 5/08/2012 ~GG~

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 6:05:00 AM

    Congrats on your deserving win, Mandy.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:24:00 PM

    This is just so much fun, dear Mandy-- I was looking at a trampoline in the store the other day and was so tempted to jump on it (sadly couldn't, not allowed) but ah, this from your poem sounds so much more fun ;) adorable poem and really glad to read this :)

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:38:00 PM

    Mandy, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 6:48:00 AM

    Mandy, yep...I've had a go on a trampoline, too...ha. Great one! Congrats!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:13:00 PM

    I was thinking it might be skinny dipping. Cute poem and l can see why Andrea faved it. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 9:20:00 PM

    hahaha, love it ,congrats on making it onto Andrea's faves list, this is outstanding

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 8:58:00 PM

    Oh Oh Mandy, good for you. Love it well deserved a win. Congrats. Love Terry xoxo 7<<<<<<

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:26:00 PM

    Oh you took me then boom, I thought you were going for a swim! J.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 6:01:00 PM

    What a delightful surprise your last line. cCngratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 1:26:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Mandy.....I like the build up to the surprise ending

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:35:00 PM

    This is absolutely great and excellent poem/piece my very dear friend, Mandy! I love it so much and I extremely enjoyed reading it giving me jumbo smiles! A real fave of the host and me! Thanks a lot for sharing and my big warm congratulations on your well-deserved grand win! Have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 1:34:00 AM

    love this first time,, and still do congrats

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:30:00 AM

    lol Mandy, I missed this one....Seren

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 3:47:00 AM

    here's one i've missed, again a awesome write, you really draw one in, in to every word, then the juxtaposition, which really is a wonderful skill, usually only seen on Haiku and Senryu!!! soup mail..

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 8:56:00 PM

    A daring, carefree and steamy rendezvous...gettin ur groove on sistah! Smile. A sweet write...congrats. Thanks for visit and comment...one love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:40:00 AM

    Soup Mail hun,,,

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 6:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Craig's "Funny Poem" contest Mandy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:19:00 PM

    mt.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:53:00 PM

    hahahaha, this is GREAT stuff. You should post THIS in a blog because it 's all your own imagination, right? I love this. (no fair saying his pants came off. why did his pants have to come off just to jump up and down. hahha) A fave.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 8/10/2012 2:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The funny contest. Pants came of cos you don't want to scuff the knees ha ha, and some of my poems are fiction, some of my poems are true I won't tell you all which is which I'll leave that up to you xx
  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:53:00 PM

    oh, and which contest did this win? congrats.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 8:54:00 AM

    LOL. Congratulations on such a great poem... Wonderfully written and said.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 12:56:00 PM

    I'm home sick and this just brightened my day. Well done, congratulations on your win. Lee

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 8/9/2012 4:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Poor you are you far from home and will you get back soon? Keep your chin up and have a wonderful day xx
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 7:58:00 AM

    Mandy, congrats on your win in Craig's contest today!!! Love, Gail

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Congratulation on your win. I love the way this ends.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 2:49:00 AM

    enjoyed the story with a greeat ending,mandy... cheers to you for the win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 1:24:00 AM

    lol.... THIS is what the art of writing is about: the punchline. This is going under my fav poems. Congratulations on your win, Mandy. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:59:00 PM

    Congrats, Mandy. Great job. Enjoyed. Nice going. Kudos. hugs,Ralph

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:50:00 PM

    very clever and funny! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:36:00 PM

    Ah you had me going Mandy, very cute, enjoyed hugs vie

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:00:00 PM

    I was in suspense all the way to the end ....congrats on a great win Mandy

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