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STILL LIFE - WITH FRUIT, DOILY AND BOTTLE

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STILL LIFE - WITH FRUIT, DOILY AND BOTTLE

STILL LIFE - WITH FRUIT, DOILY AND BOTTLE

They spill!
Of her he’d had his fill
He tipped the table
Dumped!
Her oranges, apples, pears
Surprised the tea cup biddies -
Set them on their ears -
Then, with her priceless lacey cloth
Had wiped the floor of fruity froth
Hence he meant to finish the job 
Attacked the bottle with a fork
Laughed, then pulled the noisy cork


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  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:43:00 PM

    Thanks for your many comments and catching up on my poems today, Daver. You have a lot of life in ya yet, my poor blasted tree. haha. I am getting more and more blasted each year.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 3:54:00 PM

    You have crafted an elegant poem out of a simple kitchen incident. Such is the power of imagination. It is God gifted. Your poems inspire me. Have you published a book? Incidentally my collection of poems titled The Rainbow of Dreams has been published by Createspace of Amazon and is available from Amazon. Thanks for your kind comments on my poem The Town Called Sintra. Tell me before coming if you need any help. I'll stroll with you in the gardens of Sintra and discuss today's lustful society.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:12:00 AM

    Very good one Daver....well done! :) :) // Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:43:00 PM

    this one is so funny, Daver. And the title for it, GREAT stuff!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 12:43:00 PM

    edgy, energetic peep into some slightly rowdy moment, andrew... your images fill me up!...:) greeeat job!..:) huggs!

    austin Avatar daver austin Date: 8/7/2012 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Who is this Andrew guy? daver
  1. Date: 8/7/2012 12:29:00 PM

    I have always loved the element of a surprise or twist, so this fulfills nicely. I've got to read more of your work; you deserve it for its quality--and for the great things you have said about mine! Prepare, my dear.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 9:00:00 AM

    Daver love the image here, and the astonished looks....well done....David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Oh, an angry guest, Daver.:( Sounds like that wasn't his first bottle of the day! Love the flow, the energry and emotion of this write! If he was the one serving the refreshments, I hope they all headed for the door.:) Best wishes, Love, Mikki